[Report This]Date: 03/10/07 - 04:51 pm Title: Late Night Snacks
the story is okay so far, but you should consider getting a Betafor this story, there are a number of mistakes in it. when Harry takes out his walkman, he thinks of Ton`s reaction. surely you mean Ron? Otherwise, I`d like to read the whole story. :-)
[Report This]Date: 18/08/06 - 05:36 pm Title: Late Night Snacks
Is there more is there more?!?! That was Brill! x
[Report This]Date: 02/02/06 - 03:55 pm Title: Late Night Snacks
"...being a full time college art student and all." A decent story but it's pretty damn obvious you're underage.
[Report This]Date: 07/07/05 - 04:36 am Title: Late Night Snacks
in the 3rd sentence after the song it says 'but he couldn't put a finer on it.' shouldn't it be finger and not finer????
[Report This]Date: 28/07/04 - 10:54 pm Title: Late Night Snacks
*love* the song... story's not half bad either ;)... keep it coming... although there were a couple of typos - i'd be happy to proof read before you post if you want!!
[Report This]Date: 11/07/04 - 12:10 am Title: Late Night Snacks
I like it so far, and I sure hope you update it; I don't care when, as long as you do it, OK?