Reviews For Coming Together
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Reviewer: Alex Dansen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 31/05/10 - 11:22 am Title: 1/1

Surprised, was not expecting this, but by surprised I mean pleasantly. Original, interesting idea and it kept me reading until the end :D

Must say though, I'm quite fond of James now, shame he had to go :)

Reviewer: chocolate_kat Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 26/04/09 - 11:41 pm Title: 1/1

m.p.d. is such a good twist to the story.

Reviewer: absolute_hp Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/01/09 - 09:10 am Title: 1/1

i will always love this fic:)
its so dandy.. and completely believable.
i luurvee youuuu!

Reviewer: Babelfish Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/08 - 08:10 am Title: 1/1

... i hav eread some of your stproies and I abseloutely love them! I wish you would continue some of them,like this one, althought I do get the point of stopping.

Reviewer: chocolate_kat Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/08 - 02:41 am Title: 1/1

i love it! i want to cry.

Reviewer: Feromone Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 26/05/07 - 08:23 pm Title: 1/1

wow I really liked this especially at the ending, I thought it was a joke at first, but when i understood..really good, just really...well written

Reviewer: forbidden Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/06 - 02:15 am Title: 1/1

I liked it. It was very well written and the split personality gave it some extra spice.

Reviewer: mysticblackroses Signed star star [Report This]
Date: 23/11/05 - 01:33 am Title: 1/1

this is really odd. and confusing. i didnt really like it that much.

Reviewer: pipins ancestor Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/05 - 04:40 pm Title: 1/1

awwwwwwwwwwwww can you do another fic to continue this? please? for me? long term reviwer of all your fics pretty much wherever you post them!!! ive read all your fics at least once on, i think, all the places youve posted them, including your website thingy, that all americans seemt o have, but none of us british seem to know about...

Reviewer: lovedbytheangels Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 22/08/05 - 07:05 pm Title: 1/1

wow! this is so... i don't know the words... psyco? sweet? maybe a mix of both.. a dark/light harry.. two personalities that make a whole so different but so alike and with so much in common... but i'm not making much sense... lol i loved it.. i guess that's all i have to say.. gonna put it in my favorites if you don't mind... ************lovedbytheangels

Reviewer: ilubeiriyuki Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 26/06/05 - 05:31 pm Title: 1/1

Amazing; have to give you points for originality. And this was your first HP fic? Wow. My first HP fic got rejected .. -cries- Anyway, that's beside the point. Very nicely written, and I love the way you intergrated Harry and James together ((like father like son,lols)). Very original. Keep up the good work. -cheers-

Reviewer: rainfall4me Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/06/05 - 03:16 pm Title: 1/1

I really liked this, I think you should add to it!

Reviewer: Black Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 15/04/05 - 10:54 am Title: 1/1

You misused the word "loose." You should have written "lose." Other than that, it was fantastic.

Author's Response: Thank you. I know about my "loose" and "lose" problem thanks to you and other reviewers and am working to squish it :). Hopefully my newer fic should not have the same problem. Thank you for pointing it out or I would still be oblivious. I do know the difference (and always have), but I have this typing habit that I am working to curb where I type 'loose' all the time. My beta seems to miss it as well, but hopefully I am training myself into doing it properly :).

Reviewer: painterchica Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/02/05 - 11:07 pm Title: 1/1

Man, that was fucked up... ...I loved it. *grins hugely*

Author's Response: LOL - it was a bit screwy wasn't it :). So pleased you liked it.

Reviewer: MakalaniAstral Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/01/05 - 01:58 pm Title: 1/1

that was fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you - that was my first ever Harry Potter fic.

Reviewer: Teva Anonymous star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 24/08/04 - 03:35 pm Title: 1/1

Very nice. Multiple personality syndron is not something one finds tackled everyday, and can explain a lot about strange and dislocated behavious.The Harry of the books is horribly normal all things considered. This was a rather wicked way to get Harry and Draco together. It was a pity you had to have the James persona be his own information dump, it would have been nice to see Draco work it out for himself, which would have enabled you to show he's the inteligent character you describe and not the arragant little thug he so often is. I look forward to reading what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you, pleased you liked it. I suppose I could have had Draco discover things for himself, but I'm not sure the wizarding world would be up on multiple personality syndrome. Might be interesting to see how they would view it though. Thanks again.

Reviewer: pendent Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 23/07/04 - 11:42 am Title: 1/1

Mmm, double personalities, so intresting!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: ancientgirl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/04 - 03:04 pm Title: 1/1

God how could you just end it there. Please just one more chapter. This was very good.

Author's Response: I do have a whole other story, but I just can't finish the last two scenes - they will not play ball. Maybe one day I'll figure out where it's going.

Reviewer: ancientgirl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/04 - 03:03 pm Title: 1/1

God how could you just end it there. Please just one more chapter. This was very good.

Author's Response: Thank you. I have another one half done for it, but it won't tell me how it finished :(.

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