hehe last 5 words are brilliant
That was great. I'll never see Lucius in the same way again. Essex barman - the hair - of course.
Wonderful!!!! Hahahahahahahahahaha, the fact that Lucius is really Luke Miller!!! Fucking great!! And the use of the cane!! *drools* Think I need a shower now!
o.o...the man asks if he can keep his cane? after all tha.. well! whatever keeps the ocean rocking!
Greate job!I love this piece espeacially the Luke Miller part.Love it.
Beautifully written indeed; this is the first Severus/Lucius fic I have ever read and it was wonderful. Particularly liked the ending and the beginning; the beginning was pure genius. Even I was shocked at the revelation; yes I know, it's just a fan fic. But, the idea was awesome. Smut with just touch of humor; perfect indeed. Keep writing.
Very sultry, and passionate. Great job! =)
You get major points for originality and putting Snape on top of Lucius. Luke Miller...I liked the end, too, by the way.
I forgot to say how original I think this is! Your take on Malfoy is one I've never come across before. I love the way you humanize him. GREAT JOB! Original ideas are hard to come by and you hit the spot! :)
I LOVED THIS!!!! You had me laughing out loud! Great job! Good 'ol cane!
*whimpers.. crosses legs.. goes to take a cold shower*
splendid. -giggles-
Luke Miller. Too perfect! That is the most unique take on Lucius Malfoy I've ever read. And, as always, the smut was hawt!