::can do little more than applaude:: Heavens...your grasp of the characters was so very spot on...I rarely find myself at a loss for words concerning Potterfics (I've become a bit jaded, I'm afraid) but I can say without reservation that this was a supurb piece of writing. My words can't do it justice. Well done. And now comes the part where I shamelessly beg you for more of your work. ::begs::
O.k. Rilla, How can you put Percy with our lovely (except the moustash) Remus with the hardbacked pompus boar. But! apart from the pairing and I bow to the writer, it was as usual a very good fanfic. 8 stars could have awarded 9 but want you to keep writing and improving. blessed be, are you starting to feel storked, Its really nice to keep finding one of the best fanfic writers on different sites.
That was excellent!! Loved the description of a helpless Percy!
Finally the boy is going home... And I like your writing. Excellent!