Vivid! that's hard to do sometimes. great job
I liked this one! *gives it a 9* nice job! I would give it a 10 but... erm.. not to be rude or anything... but Luna's a Ravenclaw...XD lol. but otherwise I love it!
Author's Response: Yes dear - she looks PAST the Hufflepuff table TO where Luna is sitting.
I know she is a Ravenclaw, I also addressed this in a previous comment :p
not a word out of place
Weird, I'm not sure how I feel about Hermione/Luna, as much as I love unusual femmeslash pairings. I do like how you did it, though.
Thats really cute. :) I like it. Any chance for a sequel?
Aw. So sweet. Love is blind. Hehehe. The same to just fit.
Awww, hot and cute! I love it!
Seems a bit short but i do like how you detail it! Good JOB!
wow, i love it, im a fan of any slash fic that has hermione in it and this one stands out amongst some ive read, nice work thought it would be good to see a follow up and maybe more action between the two girls, anyway, great work, im loving it :P
isn't luna a ravenclaw? i really like this fic, hermione's internal condescention towards luna seems very realistic.
Author's Response: Yes, Luna is a Ravenclaw. Hermione looks past the Hufflepuff table to where Luna is sitting ;) Glad you liked it!
A sweet little drabble you have here. I love Luna fics. You have written her wonderfully. Great job!