Wow, very nice.
I must say, the thought of Harry/Draco didn't really appeal to me. I've read a few, but, I must say, I like yours the best. Although, since Draco was blackmailing Harry, I assumed Harry would be bottom. Interesting change though.
Great fic, all-in-all. The ending was lovely, by the way. ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really more of a bottom!Harry myself, but the person I wrote it for specifically requested top!Harry. I'm glad you found it interesting, and I'm glad you liked the fic so much! ^_^
I am a literary critic, not officially however; I hate spelling errors, OOC and everything in between that I could cross out as distasteful. Unfortunately for me, I have nothing to criticize on for this fic. This fic was absolutely appealing, very straight forward, has humor in it, and best of all, contained no spelling errors. Nicely written too, might I add. The way the story began was what I loved best; certainly very refreshing. I wouldn't necessarily state that this fic was OOC simply because it is hard to decide which character should bottom for the other as both Harry and Draco are very aggressive. Why most fan fic authors decide that Draco should bottom for Harry I can only wonder, though it works out just fine. At the risk of being redundant, I congratulate you on writing a fic that even I, being the perfectionist that I am, cannot criticize.
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I appreciate the thoughtfulness of you review. I agree with you about Draco generally being the top, but the person I wrote the fic for wanted him to bottom. *g* That was a challenge for me, and I'm glad that you liked it so much! Thanks again.
I must say that Draco is very much a Slytherin here, and you don't often see him being that submissive. But I think, he's a little too submissive for my taste. I like him and Harry on an equeal footing. Your story was nicely written, though.
Author's Response: I'm glad he was Slytherin enough! *g* I was worried about that.