oh dear god, where is lesson two? Please write one! j_a
Huh. That's not what I'd call BDSM. BDSM is supposed to be fun.
interesting. onto frogs 3...
Great story, and very well-written.
I liked it and I think you should consider continuing the story about Sev's lessons. yum, yum, yum!!!
Very interesting. A debauched look into the ways of making a Death Eater is something I have never come across, and, I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your descriptions and details were very intricate, ver consistent - you have a very nice writing style. This is my OTP, Lucius and Severus. I am pretty picky about how this pairing is written. But, from a LM/SS fan's point of view, you did this pairing sweet justice. Well done. I hope to see more of your work in the furture.
Delicious, and very intricate with power struggle. I very much enjoyed.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. This was definitely a descent into the twisted logic that ties the philosophies behind power-struggles and minion-rankings with BDSM tendencies. The power to be had in submissive actions versus dominant ones...most people don't realize a submissive has actual control in a BDSM relationship, because most people don't realize the first tenet of leadership (aka power over others). Leaders lead only by the consent of others, whether it's active or passive (apathetic) consent. When someone doesn't consent to be ruled, it's very hard to be their ruler. Conversely, if you don't consent to follow someone, you will never be a follower, and never be able to borrow that other person's fame for yourself... Eh, I'm waxing philosophical over a PWP. Go figure... ~Lotm