a big WOW!!!!!!!!!! to this one!!!! Its SOOOOOO good, LilyMalfoy you ARE a genius!!!! you've inspired me into writing my own fanfic slash, its gonna be good but not nearly as good as THIS!!!!!!!! I love the way you kept what happened to Ron a secret untill Harry says "stop being such a girl", its just so....crafty! Keep the stories coming LilyMalfoy, nice work ciao for now
I adore Harry/Ron stories. This one was great! The dialogue was realistic, the charactterization was perfect, the situation was tragically hilarious. The ones where Harry and Ron are adults and sharing an apartment are the best... Hope you write more Harry/Ron very soon.