That was icredibly hot. I was so happy to find a fic with my favourite femme pairing, and even happier when it was so well written. Thanks!
OWoooaoah wow! Amazing! xx
I was attracted by the title at my first glance of the list, and then... Oh, it's so hot! I love the dominant Bella. Surely she's always in the dominancy to everyone except the Dark Lord, but here is different 'cos it is a lovestory with a charming lady. I wonder if I can tranlate it into another language? I mean CHINESE. I assure you that your name would be put up as author once it's up on the adult HP forum.
When I first started my search for femslash awhile ago I found this story, but lost it. I can't tell you how happy I am to find it again and that was some years ago, or felt like it. This has always been a favorite. I love Bellatrix and I love the way you wrote her as a total dominant. Steamy.
Are you aware how incredible erotic this story is? I´m getting sooo turned on by reading it. Sexy as Hell. And spectacularly written. The descriptions of how it feels and so... Gives me goosebumps. Wish you would write more femslash.
hey i just wanted to tell you that this story was very well written. i really like how dominatrixs in it. my favorit line was "Bellatrix left her like that until the next time that she would strike, like the Snake that she was." that was a great cloesing sentence. i also liked the surprice of the being, the paring was really good too.
This story is so hot I almost fainted ! God, you really do know how to write a "dirty" story. Thank you for this unexpected pleasure.
kiny. very different than other stories i've read. good job.
I especially loved the end where Bellatrix doesn't give a shit. I'm ususally so much more of a romantic, but that turned me on just fine.
My first femslash fiction ever and it was hot. God, I adore it.
Loved it ;)Loved how you built up the story
Whoa, great story. I need a cold shower after that and my vibrator. Thank you.
Oh, very nice. Loved it; I've never read a Bellatrix/Lily fic before in my life as an avid fic reader and wow… you've made me a fan. ^_^ Very nice job.
So, so hot. Great wording, great concept, great development, and I love the way you built the characters. All around an amazing story. Love it! :)
it was hot. I love the feeling you gave to Bella. well done
uhm well yes....I will be taking a cold shower now. A very long, very cold shower. I shouldn't have read this before going to work.
OK, now that I’m reading more of your fics, I’m noticing that there’s a pattern here… many of your topics *should*, by all rights, squick me clean out of here… but they don’t. How, oh how do you make something like this work so well? *shakes head* I admire you greatly. Bellatrix here is absolutely luscious (I want to know what happens to her when she walks away! Someone definitely needs to do to her what she did to Lily…) And Lily… man oh man. If James could see her now, eh? ;-) I don’t read much femmeslash because I find a lot of it so desperately bad, but I really liked this. ~Lee
Author's Response: All these wonderful reviews from you! Thank you very much! This fic was written for a challenge on a LiveJournal community, hp_rimming. (Wonderful name, is it not? Hehe.) There was little drive for this except for the fact that there is not enough femmeslash out there, especially with Bellatrix, and I had never written femmeslash, nor anything with Bellatrix in it, so I stole the moment annd wrote this. I wanted to showthe sheer lecherousness of Bellatrix, in all her Slytherin glory. (And I am certain that when she walks away, she has Rodolphus doing just as debauched things to her, hehe.) So, really, this was written all in the aim of producing pure stroke fiction - ie, something to wank off to. ;) Well, if that sort of thing turns you on, that is. Thank you, once again, for your wonderful feedback. You've made my morning! :)