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Reviewer: mysticblackroses Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/06 - 03:42 am Title: 1/1

gawd. thats depressing

Reviewer: error_42 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 22/01/06 - 09:59 am Title: 1/1

This was realy sad, but so beautiful. I enjoied reading it.

Reviewer: Snapril Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 22/11/05 - 11:32 pm Title: 1/1

I'm completely speechless. Very well wrote. Mildly fucked up, what happened to Severus.

Reviewer: IVElmsbrooke Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 25/06/05 - 02:10 am Title: 1/1

Crimeny! I haven't read a Severus/Harry story tonight that didn't have a bad ending and I got to say this tops them all. All of them have reduced me to tears but with yours I had to get up and walk away for a bit. I think I'm a tad bit to emotional. Even pictures can reduce me to tears and I need no memory or story to go with them. Well written one shot. Now I have to hunt down a good humor fic to cheer me up. Be happy, be healthy, and keep writing...

Reviewer: IVElmsbrooke Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 25/06/05 - 02:10 am Title: 1/1

Crimeny! I haven't read a Severus/Harry story tonight that didn't have a bad ending and I got to say this tops them all. All of them have reduced me to tears but with yours I had to get up and walk away for a bit. I think I'm a tad bit to emotional. Even pictures can reduce me to tears and I need no memory or story to go with them. Well written one shot. Now I have to hunt down a good humor fic to cheer me up. Be happy, be healthy, and keep writing...

Reviewer: GothicalWishes Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 17/06/05 - 01:43 pm Title: 1/1

Wow... I cried... hell i bawled... and i love it even more because of that! I love stories that make me cry and make me hurt inside, and your was wonderful! The idea of Snape being so helpless and loosing all his control and his sanity... not from Voldermort or any other thing from the war, but simply from the fact that Harry had given him a gift... It was beautiful, poetic and amazing, i loved it. It is a lot better than many of the MCD HP/SS fics that i've read. My favourite line was "So I give you my final gift, born out of the love of my heart: I die and free you from watching my death." because it was so potent and so powerful, and something that takes strength and skill to write, and you pulled it off beautifully... well done! GothicalWishes XxXxX

Reviewer: lilylupin7 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 24/03/05 - 10:32 pm Title: 1/1

That's so sad. I almost cried. Ah well but it was well written

Reviewer: Snegurochka Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/03/05 - 03:50 pm Title: 1/1

Wow. This is beautiful! Ignore your naysayers. It may be too dark for some people’s tastes, which is their choice, but it is well-written, creative, and full of wonderfully eerie and poignant imagery. Example: “With an inarticulate cry, he fell to his knees and stared into glazed green eyes rimmed with blood dried into hard black tears.” I adore that line.

I am also transfixed by the idea of Harry as a war veteran, a traumatised soldier who was forced to kill, and, as Snape says, forgotten about afterwards. Haunting, poetic, and terrifyingly true-to-life, for anyone who has ever fought in a war, or knows someone who has. Very well done. ~Lee

Author's Response: thank you so much. I wrote this piece becasue I was anoyed at some very fluffy portrayals of post war trauma that I had been reading. I am sick of people solving somone's entire psychosis wiht sex, or a hug. I'm glad you enjoyed ( well, maybe enjoyed is not the word, but you get my drift)

Reviewer: LoveLupin Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 22/02/05 - 06:52 am Title: 1/1

I think it is ok. It is good but I don't know wieard

Reviewer: Rosemont Signed star star half star [Report This]
Date: 19/02/05 - 10:55 pm Title: 1/1

Well, that wasn't any fun at all. Very dark perspective. Well written and disturbing. I don't thank you for it but I acknowledge good writing when I see it. Cheers, Rosemont

Reviewer: Alynna Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 19/02/05 - 04:47 am Title: 1/1

*sniff* Poor Severus. Poor Harry. Nicely done.

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