Date: 23/05/10 - 10:43 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
Oh me, oh my. Stone walls really don't shield as much sound as they'd hope, I guess. And the newspaper! Priceless!
[Report This]Date: 12/07/08 - 04:18 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
yep loved this one too :D poor snape being teased so
[Report This]Date: 10/05/08 - 05:34 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
It's good writing like yours that actually makes me start to like slash.
[Report This]Date: 17/09/06 - 05:49 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
I love this. I want to see more of this pairing from you--you are such a brilliant writer.
Author's Response: Thank you for your response. I love that I still get reviews for this story. I am very flattered you think I'm a good writer. I am working on something right now for the Snupin Santa exchange...or whatever it's called :)
Cheers, Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 29/08/06 - 06:34 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
Yaye! they make the perfect cuple!
[Report This]Date: 07/08/06 - 10:37 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
Lovely.
I've read the first part some time ago and now I found this. I love it.
[Report This]Date: 30/06/06 - 06:31 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
Another sequel, please?
You have a gift for really comedic writing
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. It's funny, I only really like to read the serious stuff, but when I go to write it just comes out funny. I had started another sequel but...well...Maybe I'll get back to it. Cheers, Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 28/03/06 - 05:36 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
BRILLIANT!! ten stars, complete with a hearty belly-chortle!
[Report This]Date: 13/03/06 - 04:02 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
more more more !!!!! the tricksy little wolf!!! AH *dies of squeeing* MT
[Report This]Date: 06/03/06 - 09:46 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
Mischievious Lupin is fantastic! Great way to get back to Snape trying to outwit him in "a question of preferences".
And the smutty bit is so hot...
Definitely one of my favoutite Snape/Lupin fic. Lovely!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for both reviews, you made my Monday!
Cheers,Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 02/01/06 - 06:26 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
That was so funny. I'm still giggling... hehe! Very nice, love!
[Report This]Date: 02/01/06 - 02:24 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
That was so funny. I'm still giggling... hehe! Very nice, love!
[Report This]Date: 24/11/05 - 10:27 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
OMG!!!!!! **melts into a puddle at your feet** That was the funniest, cutest story I have read in a while. You are an awesome writer. I love the sexy Snape in your story and Lupin was cut too...but Snape was the show stealer. I really really loved both the stories in this series. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your stories. I think this is the first story of yours that I have read, so I don't know if you've written any more, but have you written Harry/Draco fanfic? I am a HUGE fan of HP/DM and I would LOVE to read it if your Draco is anything like Snape...**begs** ENCORE and three thumbs waaaay up!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14/10/05 - 01:44 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
heehee, loved this funny story, so cute!
[Report This]Date: 16/08/05 - 03:14 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
'"Don?t go getting grumpy with me, Severus Snape. This is your doing."' Just loving it, all of it!
[Report This]Date: 25/07/05 - 10:56 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
that was very good funny to at the right bits good job i love how remus came in starkers i dont normally read this pairing but this is very good
[Report This]Date: 24/06/05 - 03:15 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
lmao, that was great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 19/06/05 - 09:23 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
As with the prequel, I found this to be very OOC, but so endearing I didn’t care. Wonderfully funny, and the playfulness of the two is heartwarming. Love Snape’s, "Snape’s don’t..."
Didn’t like the ending, however. Not because I necessarily wanted something different, that’s up to you, but didn’t like the sudden change of tone. It went from a gentle comedy, to something suddenly very serious. Had this not been the end of the story, just the end of a chapter, the feeling would have been different. Having two short stories in the same vein, then suddenly doing a switch in the last couple of paragraphs, kinda leaves the reader blinking in confusion. You suddenly wonder if you were supposed to be enjoying things so much.
A perfect solution would be to extend the story, *grins* or chop the melodrama and leave it a comedy. But, hey – just a suggestion! Let me say again, I loved the story. You have a real gift for writing humor, are absolutely devilish, and gave me the best laugh of the week.
Favorite phrase – "... while his insane werewolf lover, currently incapacitated by his own wit, was naked in the next room ..."
Author's Response: Now that was some good feedback specific and helpful. I happen to agree with everything you've said. I have been itching to go edit the story and change the ending almost from the moment I posted it. It was not at all what I had originally intended. I don't know the etiquette for that though, can I just go in and change it? Or is what's done is done? It seems like cheating somehow :)
Also I had (and have) every intention of a follow up and have begun writing it, however life keeps interfering...and interfering..and, well you know.
Thanks for your thoughtful comments.
Cheers, Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 01/06/05 - 07:21 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
From this line, which made me cry tears of tenderness:
“You are so beautiful, Severus, so beautiful. You are mine forever, my love, my only. I love you so much Severus.”
To this line, which made me cry tears of hilarity:
"Having the Headmaster invade his quarters while his insane werewolf lover, currently incapacitated by his own wit, was naked in the next room didn’t bode well for the beginning of his day."
I *loved* this story. Thank you!
Author's Response: Wow, that might be the best review I've ever gotten. Thankyou. I hope you read the first story. I think its a little better but...
Cheers, Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 22/03/05 - 12:21 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
Those are my boys! Crazy as always. Glad I never had to babysit for them, breaking up that many fights and arguments would wear me out pretty quick. I can only imagine what an adventure naptime must have been. Oy vay. -cO
[Report This]Date: 13/03/05 - 10:44 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
lovely. funny. with enough seriousness so it doesn't feel cheap ;-)
I think I shall give this a 10 stars rating.
Author's Response: Such high praise! Thank you thank you!
[Report This]Date: 11/03/05 - 07:03 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
YESSSSS!!!! This made me laugh...HARD! I loved the on going inside jokes, and how nicely this wrapped up. It's good. Nice Job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's lovely feedback. Cheers!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/05 - 11:40 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
I actually liked the first one better, if I may be blunt, but this one is not lacking at all. Laughed all the way through it.
Author's Response: Oh, Idefinitely like the first one better too! It just flew out of my pen (Yes, I write with pen and paper.) Wrote itself, really and I think that's when you know its good. This one was harder to write and it shows. I'm still new at this game and hope to get better! Thanks for the feedback on both stories!
Cheers, Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 07/03/05 - 01:36 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
I like the way you turned what was essentially a joke story into this much more touching fic. I think you could go on with it, if you wanted to. I know I'd like to see what sort of job Remus gets, and whether or not he and Snape go public.
Author's Response: I hope to lighten things up again in the nect story. Thanks for the feedback.