[Report This]Date: 04/03/05 - 07:07 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
Oh poor Snape! LOL...but he needed that little dose of reality...he was getting a bit too concerned about it. Great sequal. I was roling with laughter at the first one, and this one added not only humor, but a good dose of caring and smut too! :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback. Cheers, Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 03/03/05 - 12:27 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
Soooo, when can I expect the next part, uh?
This is good, the teasing and all that...
That last part... This is getting serious, right?
Some angst maybe... Of course some fun...
Mmmm, you must'n leave like this... when is the next part? Please, pretty please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your enthusiasm! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll get the next part out soon. Cheers, Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 02/03/05 - 10:53 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
Brilliant! I loved the first installment so much...great to see a follow-up.
LadyM
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I've had fun writing them both.
[Report This]Date: 01/03/05 - 03:49 pm Title: Capter 1 of 1
Oops! Now I feel sheepish. :) It must have been that I was just getting into this new twist about Remus's renewed unemployment, and it looked from my scroll bar like there was more left, and there was some blank space at the end that made it look like an error... Le sigh! Sorry! I certainly didn't mean to inadvertently insult your ending! It's maybe a slight bit... abrupt? But now that I've read it again it makes more sense. Anyway, still a great fic! Don't mind me, I'm just slightly insane. ;-) ~Lee
Author's Response: Definitely an abrupt ending, I agree. I guess I just like to end things with Snape swooping out of the room! Ha! Thanks for your feedback, I never thought any of it was unkind or insulting. Cheers,
Rosemont
[Report This]Date: 01/03/05 - 08:47 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
Oh, I hope this is not a one-shot. You've got an interesting story to tell. This plays beautifully after A Question of Preference (which I loved). Your characterizations are spot on. Thanks!
Author's Response: I do have one more little story I'd like to tell in this series. I don't know about Snape being spot on though. He's a little too light-hearted for me. I'll need to do something to really make him angry next.
[Report This]Date: 01/03/05 - 04:22 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
Amusing and sweet. I thought it particularly touching that Remus has trouble getting Severus to believe him.
"...This was perfect, he thought, but nothing lasts forever. Severus Snape was not used to getting what he wanted, or keeping it if he did."
Remus sighed, “I’ll make you believe, I have my whole life to make you believe.”
An amusing decription: "That owl was as finicky as his master."
A couple of ouches at the end. l hope Remus will be able to find a job near Severus.
Author's Response: I was so surprised at the direction the ending of this story took. I Didn't have any intention of getting serious. What happened? Poor Remus, I'll find something for him to do.
[Report This]Date: 01/03/05 - 03:42 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
Hurrah! I'm so glad to see this sequel! I think you might have gone over the chapter word limit, though, dear, because the ending is cut off. (It's happened to me before). You may have to shift some of this to a new chapter, and then add the ending. Some of us want to know what happens!
But apart from that, it's delicious so far. :) I like the idea that the prank in "A Question of Preference" had repercussions. I love Snape's panic. I love Remus's taunting. I love nekked!Remus appearing in front of Dumbledore! Ha. In short, nice sequel! Now what happens to poor, unemployed Remus?? ~Lee
Author's Response: I'm afraid to say, my friend, that it does end with Severus stomping off to bed. The chapter was not cut off...unless that was a subtle hint you would like more?
[Report This]Date: 01/03/05 - 02:41 am Title: Capter 1 of 1
Vedy-vedy goot! More Please!
-lifeblood
Author's Response: Thanks! There just might be more, stay tuned. Cheers, Rosemont