Wow, oh, Wow! I liked this story and wish I could see what happens in the morning and with Ron and all that...
Great loved it a nice H/G femslash
I couldnt read this becuase I lost concentration thinking about smoking and what a nasty habit it is. You sould really never write a story with smoking in it because it causes the reader to focus on that instead of the plot.
Hmm, very interesting chapter. Still, I'm surprised Ginny isn't more pissed off at Ron's behavior toward Hermione.
All I will say is where's the next chapter?! That was an awesome first chapter. I'm already hooked and intruiged.