This was the first time I had read a Pansy/Ginny story and I must say, you did a brilliant job. I had never really paid any attention to Pansy before, but you made her a quite interesting character. Very well done.

This is such an adorable little story...that is incredibly well written. Pansy actually comes off as likable and sort of sweet in this fic. The depiciton of Ginny is simply delightful. I highly recommend this story. Easily one of the best I've ever read.

I loved this story. I was happy to see something longer than a paragraph too.:) This was a great read. The characters were amazing and I only had a few concerns with the writing, none really worth mentioning. What I loved best was the humor! Just some lines of sarcastic wit. That's totally my flavor. Pansy was amazing. I really loved the bit about imagining herself as the Queen. It's such the stereotype to be a princess. That was a stroke of brilliance. With all the depth that Pansy was already written with you took it further and made her so much more real here. My hat's off to you. As for Ginny! I've seen a lot of writers make her the shy one or the dominant one but maybe in one other has she been a closeted Slytherin. haha. and realistically to boot! She's a fun character to read for how she's interpreted and changed. I, too, was sad to see the end of this story. I think it would be no thing at all to have guiet a few chapters come from you in a story like this. I loved it, and thank you for writing it.:)

i really liked the story. i love ginny/pansy stories so it was nice to read one. very well written. and there were few to no grammer mistakes and that always makes a story better!

this was awsomley written. you really worked the surprise of discovering their feelings for one another into the story. i could go on and on but the point is, it was great.

Hehe. I love this piece of femmeslash... Had me squirming in all the right places for the pair. You kept the characters wonderfully in context. I salute you.

Very good story. I like the idea of Pansy being confident and lost at the same time. Thinking she knew what she wanted but not knowing until she found it in the most unlikely of places. As for Ginny, has anyone else ever wondered if she could have been in Slytherin? lol Thanks for the story.