that was confusing. but it was good.
wow. that was such an amazing use of Snape. sometimes i think people have forgotten canon altogether, and it was really great to see someone use the darker side of his persona. it was a tad bit confusing, but it was the kind of story that i felt more than read. extraordinary job.
That story is so original I could kick something. I've never actually seen Snape shown in such a...cannon, crazed way like that. It was actually probably almost perfect...I really hesitate tos ay that, but god what a Snape you created. Original. GREAT job. That sort of thing deserves a cake. You should buy yourself a cake. -Nina