[Report This]Date: 14/12/09 - 01:59 pm Title: Living in the Moment
"Living in the Moment" - Interesting - got the little surprise twist at the end, just not sure where that came from; but that is ok.
Now I hope that I have not lost contact with you "KateKintail"; as I actually stopped by because your friend's where discussing the "Coloured Hanky Series". However I must have taken my "Dumb" pills today as I am not sure where the series is posted to; for reading the series. Hoping you will respond to this review and let me know where to look. (I am also going to sent this via the e-mail address you provided; hope you do not mind).
Thanks for your time and hey - please DO have a great day.
[Report This]Date: 04/06/06 - 10:59 am Title: Living in the Moment
Just reading again, and loving it just as much. Poor Sirius. (I can't believe you made me say that. :-)
[Report This]Date: 29/06/05 - 09:52 am Title: Living in the Moment
nice twist at the end. me like ^__^
Author's Response: heehee :-) Thank you muchly!
[Report This]Date: 25/06/05 - 09:36 pm Title: Living in the Moment
Beautifully written; the fic I have read of yours. Nice little ending; I was a bit shocked that I had to re-read the ending to get it. XD Nice little twist too. Keep up the good job, and kee writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the twist at the end. Poor Sirius.
[Report This]Date: 24/06/05 - 09:53 pm Title: Living in the Moment
Beautifully written. I was entirely taken by surprise at the end, and the blindfold was indeed a nice touch--a little advance warning that you were about to twist the knife.
My favorite line, though, was "He want's everything he cannot easily get"--vintage Sirius. Great little fic!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the twist and felt it made sense- I definitely did want to drop tiny hints. And I'm pleased that you liked that line. You're right, it does seem to sum Sirius up rather well. Thanks! :-)
[Report This]Date: 24/06/05 - 10:16 am Title: Living in the Moment
Oh, good - you submitted it here! I'm so glad. It's such a great little piece. I love Sirius in this - needy and emotionally wrought, but not overboard. We can see exactly why he's done what he's done. And I still love the twist at the end. Every time I read it again it surprises me... in a good way! Hope to see more of your stuff here! (Cough-Coloured Hankie Series-cough). :) ~Lee
Author's Response: Well, thank YOU for recommending I do so. I'm glad you liked the way the tone and emotions worked with the situation- that was definitely what I was going for :-)
[Report This]Date: 24/06/05 - 06:08 am Title: Living in the Moment
WooHoo! So glad you brought this from your LJ - it rocks!
Author's Response: heehee Thank you for the feedback there as well, and the encouragement to post it here.