very good, funny and well written. Humour is not easy to write but you pulled it off nicely. Er, what did Dumbledore do witht eh beard? LOL
Absolutely loved it!!
So good! I loved it. Adding it to my favorites as I write this.
A spirited and endearing look inside the mind of Hogwart's capricious potions professor! I had always wondered what Severus's sense of humor would be like; he seemed to possess such a vitriolic wit, and I thought it a shame that JKR did not have the means (being a children's series) to expand further. Again, the translation was unbelievable; to translate such a work must have taken an inherent knowledge of both French and English, as well as story flow and writing in general. My humble thanks to both of you for the lovely read.
*glomps and bows down in worship to you* bloody excellent, omg, so good. detail amazing plot devine pictures....mmmmmm utterly wonderful huni!!
I absolutley fell in love with Snapes little voice. Though mine has become quite envious. *Have NOT* Right then!
Dumbledore's moment of realization as he breaks into Snape's room - absolutely priceless.! I like it that they started drawing to each other again - wonderful story.
Fan-fucking-tastic! 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 points!!!
THAT must have been interesting to have to translate properly!! Well written scene(s) there! Love this story
OOoooh! I love it that they're both thinking about each other the same way. Well written. Also , I freaked out when I realized who the crow was ... ! that HAD to have been a hot thing for Snape to see!
Again, classic stuff! Severus having to Obliviate Minerva - still laughing about that one
I have laughed and giggled through this entire first chapter! I gleefully scamper off to read the rest. There are sayings and phrases that often don't translate well into another language, but I must say, I can't imagine a better translation than this one!
How rich and sweet! I’m melting at the sex/love scene, and the rest of your writing is so witty and funny. The droll, sarcastic letter interchange between Harry and Severus was charming, and cast Harry in a light I adore: a maturing, hormonally driven teen with a passion for life and love. So many portrayals are of an angry, hateful young man who is only controlled by Snape’s greater anger and a little violence. Thanks for adding your pieces to the mix, and thanks for the translations!
Lovely. I heart it.
Nice. But yea, the marking thing is out of whack. Wikipedia actually has info on that. -stares- I think this is the link http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ordinary_Wizarding_Levels I understand it's a translated fic. Good job on the translation ^^ [And ... Harry did go to Potions N.E.W.T.s XDD ]
Wonderful story, loved it.
This was delightful! Original, intelligent, humourous, sarcastic and nothing short of brilliant. Very well done.
I DIED laughing at this story. It was absolutely great! Thanks for sharing!
WOW *pants heavily* loved the images. Snape is so damn sexy, wish i could jump in and join them!!!
Author's Response: Okay, so I don't usually respond to Lychee's reviews, but I had to comment on your choosing to review this particular chapter. I had an especially "interesting" time translating this one, as you can appreciate, I'm sure. I believe I had to open a window.
Love it keep writing
omg I just LOVE this fic.
LOL... so so good... just the laughs I needed. I really need to read more "Harry accidentally hands in something thats not his potions work" fics... they are, most... interesting.... LOVE Dumbledore's reaction, and the beating down the door, and all the dirty liitle picture's, you do make good old Voldie sound quite, intriging. Just lovely Sarah
this story was AWESOME!!! i loved it so much, thankyou for sharing it pixichic
Just finished reading. Loved it to pieces! Those two were just puuurrfect for eachother.
Oh god, I couldn't stop -giggling-! XD