THAT must have been interesting to have to translate properly!! Well written scene(s) there! Love this story
How rich and sweet! I’m melting at the sex/love scene, and the rest of your writing is so witty and funny. The droll, sarcastic letter interchange between Harry and Severus was charming, and cast Harry in a light I adore: a maturing, hormonally driven teen with a passion for life and love. So many portrayals are of an angry, hateful young man who is only controlled by Snape’s greater anger and a little violence. Thanks for adding your pieces to the mix, and thanks for the translations!
WOW *pants heavily* loved the images. Snape is so damn sexy, wish i could jump in and join them!!!
Author's Response: Okay, so I don't usually respond to Lychee's reviews, but I had to comment on your choosing to review this particular chapter. I had an especially "interesting" time translating this one, as you can appreciate, I'm sure. I believe I had to open a window.
Oh, wow. Great scenes, lovely natural images and so on. Simply great!
What a great job you have done up to chapter 4. An unlikely pairing, but very well done. Keep up the good work.
OMG. That was awesome. Continue soon. ;)
WOW This was good cant wait to ead more