Kinky. Very nice imagery thar, sir! You've managed to turn Draco into a kissable pillow.
Author's Response: lmao, hello you! thankee kindly! For some reason unbeknownst, they deleted my new prolgue chapter...No idea why...I shall have to repost it, as I haven't received an email...strange...
Author's Response: pardon? what does that mean?
Beautiful. Lovely. It also really made me appreciate Draco's body... I like the repitition, it kind of ties the whole thing up. And I loved the description, it was wonderful. Lovely.
Author's Response: thank you very much! and yes, dracos body is there to be appreciated!!!
wow, one way I was taught to wright was to relate the ending back to the beginning. I actually shivered when I got to the end. great job.
in the beginning his chest rises and falls blissfully in dream and in the end it rises and falls blissfully in reality. So romantic. His dream is a reality...oh god I loved that ending. thanks for writing it
Author's Response: *glows with praise* thank you very much, it was inspired by a one-shot that used an identical paragraph at the beginning and end, but i didnt like that, few people pick up on the fact that his dream IS his reality, so its nice to know someone spotted it! thanks for reviewing, you made my day! pipin xxx
Ahh blissful reality. A lovely little one shot. I could almost fancy Draco myself.
Author's Response: *gasps* you mean you DONT fancy draco? are you not a cold blooded female? *is shocked* gosh, i mean, even *I* fancy him!! and thank you for the review! my first one, yay! *dances*