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Reviewer: Its_Never_Enough Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/01/09 - 05:33 pm Title: Epilogue

i really love this story. must have been the 3rd or 4th time but it gets better every time.

Reviewer: firefly124 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 30/11/08 - 11:28 pm Title: Epilogue

Wow. An incredibly unlikely pairing indeed, but you did an amazing job with it! I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish.

Reviewer: morethansirius Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 27/07/08 - 10:34 pm Title: Epilogue

Wow! I once said that a really good author could make me believe just about anything. So when Subversa listed this as one of her favorites in the LJ community fangirl_tour, I took her up on it. Here was one of my favorite authors suggesting an outrageous pairing written by another of my favorite authors. It was time to test my theory. All I can say is the theory is proven. You wrote a delightful, touching, heartwarming story about a pairing I never thought in my wildest dreams would ever work. I not only believed it, I lived it. You made me laugh and smile and cry along with them. Beautiful work. I thank you for making me believe in the impossible. PS Please do me a favor and never write Severus/Sirius because I really, really don't ever want to believe in that!

Reviewer: Lelle Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/06/07 - 11:44 pm Title: Epilogue

Oh my word, you have stolen my heart with this unusual, and as you said aptly, unlikely, pairing. I love how their relationship begins; it is so unlike many other fictions simply because the draw between the characters is not a reaction to an extraordinary event, but an extraordinary reaction to a plausible situation. The focus here; Ron and Severus's capacity for emotional and sexual depth, stole the stage. I also enjoyed your characterization of Harry, as random as that seems; he is so often painted as this crazed, unsteady adolescent, unable to handle certain situations with understanding. I've always felt that so many writers forget the true narrator of the HP novels, and hence, fail to realize his intelligence or insight, or capacity for understanding other's abnormal situations. Thank you once more for a brilliant read!

Reviewer: Hekete Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 13/06/06 - 11:20 am Title: Calling Out

okay.....*breathes slowly* eww! But omg that was so Hot! Im torn. The thought of this pairing made my skin crawl when i saw it. it still does. sorta but im okay. On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Lol! It is an odd pairing, I totally agree. But they really grew on me as I wrote this. Hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Seph7 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/05/06 - 02:39 pm Title: Epilogue

This story was sooo sweet!!! It really was unlikely bedfellows!! Loved it!! It's going on the favs list!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: persimmon Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 15/04/06 - 12:31 am Title: Epilogue

oh i found the link now for the pic. It's in The Restricted Section > Adult Fanfiction Illustrations - SLASH

Author's Response: I'm afraid that I'm lost. The Restricted section of what website? I tried the RS archive, but that's just stories, and I tried Illusions, but that didn't seem to be it either! I must be missing something! Help! Lol!

Reviewer: humanoidmegg Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/04/06 - 09:06 pm Title: Epilogue

awwww that was such a sweet story!!! I loved it! *grin* An unusual pairing and tho i don't think snape was particularly canon i really enjoyed your characterisation of him. His hesitancy was particularly endearing :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! If Severus wasn't particularly his old self, well, he'd been through a lot, the poor sod! Thanks for reading and thanks for the kind review! :)

Reviewer: StormySkize Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/04/06 - 01:50 pm Title: Epilogue

I'm not generally a fan of slash...and when I do read it, I usually prefer the Snape/Lupin pairing. I started this fic because I saw it recommended, so I decided to give it a peek. I'm glad I did. It was lovely. It was full of warmth, love, and compassion and it brought me to tears in several places. Bravo to you for daring to explore this unusual pairing and for doing such a marvelous job with it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm honored that you braved my odd pairing fic. (I'm a bit of a Snupin fan myself) I started this fic as a dare, NSS and Tarah Fae were saying that this would be a very hard pairing to do believably. Once I started it, I was sucked right in. I'll miss my boys now that it's over. Thanks again! :)

Reviewer: Subversa Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/06 - 11:12 pm Title: Epilogue

Awwww! Teared me up again! I am so happy that Severus made peace with his bad memories about Albus. It made me laugh when he demanded the "bride's privileges" on the wedding night. Altogether, a very satisfying, tender, sexy romp, and I thank *you* for not abandoning it when you might have done so. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with it through thick and thin and 6 months of me not being able to write a word! You know, I may very well have written most of this fic so that Severus could demand bride privileges. Once I had that in my head, I couldn't get it out! Lol! Thank you so much for reading and for your kind reviews! :)

Reviewer: persimmon Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/06 - 09:00 pm Title: Epilogue

Severus Weasley, heh that's funny. I really enjoyed this story. For some reason Illusions has not updated my drawing for this yet :/ Oh well. The evolution of Severus' character was great. At the begining it was like he was captive to his own morose thoughts and someone opened the door to let some light it as the story progressed. I'm sad it's over. Please write another Sneasley sometime :)

Author's Response: I will undoubtedly write another Sneasley someday, it was so much fun! I'm glad you enjoyed Severus' progression, that was important to me. Let me know when that pic gets uploaded! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Kitsune_SD Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/06 - 08:08 pm Title: Epilogue

It was all beautiful, sweetie! So glad you wrote this!

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for your kind comments and support throughout! :)

Reviewer: kimilynn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/06 - 06:35 pm Title: Epilogue

I must admit I was hesitant to read this story but I had enjoyed your other work on Ashwinder so much I decided to give this one a chance. I'm very glad I did. I really enjoyed reading it quite a bit. Thanks for doing this unusual pairing and doing it well. Kim

Author's Response: Thank you for bravely jumping into a fic about so unusual a pairing! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, and I hope to post the first chapter of my next Ashwinder fic soon! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Miss Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/06 - 02:18 pm Title: Epilogue

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: HogwartsHoney Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/06 - 01:45 pm Title: Epilogue

I'm SOOO happy that you put in where Severus would eventually have to face Dumbledore again. I was hoping that he'd be able to eventually face Dumbledore again ... somehow *thunderous applause* Well done Pook!! Loved it, and like you, I'm sad to see the lads go

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Like Ron, I just didn't think that Severus was all better until he at least faced Albus' portrait. Glad that you enjoyed that bit! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Novinha Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/06 - 10:42 am Title: Epilogue

:) Aww.

::feels warmed and fuzzy inside::

That was so cute and pleasant! Thank you a lot.

Novinha

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, Novinha! You always encourage me so much! :)

Reviewer: HogwartsHoney Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/04/06 - 05:49 pm Title: Flourish

That bit about Dumbledore loving Snape brought tears to my eyes. Shame on you Pooka for making a girl cry!!! *giggles* Love this story, eagerly awaiting the rest!

Author's Response: Awwww...sorry I made you misty! I hope the rest of the presents made up for it a little! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Orin Leland Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/06 - 07:58 am Title: Flourish

This is so sweet! You really need to finish it off!

Author's Response: I plan to soon! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Subversa Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/06 - 04:46 am Title: Flourish

ah, Pook, you moved me to tears when Minerva was telling Severus how very much Albus loved him. I still have tears on my cheeks. I think you caught his emotion, and conveyed it to the reader, very well indeed. I'm glad I was right with my guess, but even I had not imagined there would be so much given to them. It's like a fairytale, but certainly no more than 2 sacrificing war heroes deserve. I look forward to the epilogue!

Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad that that bit about Albus had the desired effect. I don't want folks thinking that Severus has forgotten about him just because of a few presents. I couldn't resist going a little over the top with the presents either. The poor boys have had such a rough time! Thanks for the kind review, and thanks for sticking with the story! :)

Reviewer: Miss Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/06 - 04:42 am Title: Flourish

Now that was definitely worth the wait. My face is already cramping from the huge smile I can't get rid of. Oh yes, I want more of this.

Author's Response: Yay! Cramps from smiling is the best! Lol! After HBP, I couldn't resist doing a fic where Severus got some prizes. Glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Kitsune_SD Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/06 - 01:41 am Title: Flourish

Oh yay! I'm still loving this fic!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: persimmon Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/04/06 - 09:02 pm Title: Flourish

oh wow, oh wow, oh wow. I think i'm as overwhelmed as they both are :) That is so sweet. Aww Severus getting all emotional...I'm glad this is not the last chapters :) YAY!

Author's Response: Thanks, darlin'! I'm glad it didn't end up being the last chaprter as well. I have really enjoyed writing this one. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: shanfawn16 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 18/03/06 - 11:13 pm Title: Revelation

I just found your story, and I couldn't stop reading it! I was surprised at how wonderful I found this odd pairing! I can't wait to read the end! Keep up the wonderful work!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! My real life is a bit busy at the moment, but hopwfully there will be more soon. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Cyranothe2nd Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/03/06 - 07:32 pm Title: Revelation

REOW!!!! *pants, fanning self* Wow, that was hot!

Author's Response: Thanks! I aims to please! :)

Reviewer: Susanna03 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/03/06 - 12:26 pm Title: Revelation

This is great story so well written and Suts a pasion.Please bring more Chapters .Keap upp the good work. ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying it! Thanks! :)

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