This little piece really spoke to me... just a reminder of how hard it can really be.
Wow, that was really well written and I can actually relate to it as well. I think feelings of shame and confusion are common amongst people finding out their sexuality and who they fancy, and so is the lonliness if you realise how unlikely your fantasy is.
Poor Hermione, feeling that way, great fic!
Poor Hermione, feeling that way, great fic!
I think I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke! I never thought of that combination before, Hermione and Tonks. Very interesting. Very hot! Your words truly painted a vivid picture in my head. Would love to see it made into a short film!
Author's Response: The film is running in my head!
This is an absolutely beautiful capture of the emotions. Great show. I only wished JK would catch on to Hermione and Tonks.
Author's Response: It would be amazing if she would write in any lesbian relationships! Thanks for your comments, they are appreciated.
That was a great story!I understand what you mean by denying who you are.Well written!:-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Good job, I know the feelings you're writing about!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Beautiful exploration of emotion. It's not always easy to be ourselves...
Author's Response: Thank you, though it's not autobiographical in nature, I did write it before I came out.
i really liked the frase " She wishes she didn't feel these things about Tonks, or any other girl for that matter. The shame is over shadowed, though. It is nothing compared to the loneliness that fills her when her imagination stops,"
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and letting me know what you liked. I think loneliness is a really hard emotion to deal with.
nice dramatic build up ... imagination often becomes reality ... given enough time
Author's Response: Thanks!
good job. you really did capture the pain and isolation.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought so.