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Reviewer: Rhonwen Signed half star [Report This]
Date: 29/10/05 - 02:21 am Title: None

While I'm usually unoffended by consentual sex normally defined as pedophilia (in this context, and in this context only) I find your description (obviously written with relish) of a teacher's use of what amounts to date-rape drugs on a student both disturbing and deplorable.

Author's Response: While I appreciate your feedback, I can assure you that this was not written with 'relish' as you state. Interpretation is in the eye of the reader, but in the creation, this was not written as a glorification of pedophilia in any sense.

Reviewer: TradeWinds Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 14/10/05 - 05:38 pm Title: None

good pacing...good suggestions are positive like ...remember ... i remembered ...

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