horribly adorable!!! smitty was so sweet! and the snarry set up was hilarious. ;)
i have read now the first chapter and i like it really very, very much. the basilisk is cute :-)
Interesting. I liked it. Smitty was ever so cute.
Fabulous! I was rather intrigued at how the story would play out, as it is a rather unique plot, and it did not disappoint. The characterization of the basilisk was engaging and enthralling, and his interaction with JKR's characters was a joy to read. I read below that the piece was translated- props to you too love! I hadn't even imagined it was written any other way, it sounded so perfect.
cool. i love smitty! he is soo cool! *calms self* well, yeah. so i really like him. i like this whole plot you had going. it reminds me of a YnM fic i read called 'the species of shinigami' that was really good. but at the same time it was still VERY origional. well, til next time. ~!MD!~
This was great! Thank you for sharing. The humor was perfect. I'm glad it didn't get lost in the translations.
Awesome is the only word for this story! Thanks for a fantastic time!
that was such a great story! i loved how original it was. Smitty had such a great personality, and you really got into thinking like he would. At first i was a little squicked by him being with Draco, but Smitty really was more human than snake. and as long as Draco is happy... lol. thanks again for such a wonderful read! i really enjoyed it.
Ahhhhh.This is such a nice fic. I wish there was more.
I was a little leery when I read the description for this story, as I was unable to imagine why I'd want to read about a basilisk - it would either be too serious or too farcical. But I love virtually every other story you've written (you were my first Snarry and I still think you write it best), so I gave it a try. And, of course, I loved it! Hilarious humour (intro to Snape with such beautifully condescending manners springs to mind) without losing the ability to be serious about love and relationships. The meta-narrative qualities, with my reading about the characters reading the first of the story, were very interesting. I think you made a sound narrative choice (although I don't usually like shifts in perspective from first to third person) because we really needed Smitty's own voice to get to know his character, but to tell the rest of the story it worked so much better with the reader learning from the characters that were now setting Smitty up. Thank you so much for this and all your amazing writing (and to RaeWhit for translating!) :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the fic--I wasn't sure how it would appeal, as it's a little unusual, but Lychee is so talented in pulling off story-telling. Thanks for the translation nod--it's a great pleasure to do her fics.~~RaeWhit
...!! that was an amazing story. Not that slashy and it was sooo funny. I like the way you connected it to the other books (chamber of secrets) as well. Basically, i thought it was brilliant, so i gave it ten. I'll stop wittering now. ;) Keep writing! :)
I enjoyed this. Smitty is right, it's all about the journey.
This is the most amusing and interest-grabbing fanfic I've ever read! I love your character Smitty, along with your portrayal of the rest of the character in relation to him. AWESOME!
"Smitty, you're all red!" *dies* Oh Smitty, how I adore you! This might just be my new favourite story. Hysterically funny, touching, and unbelievably sexy at just the right moments. Brava! I *think* I know what's coming up next for our dear basilisk, but I shall wait with baited breath to see for sure... :) ~Lee
Author's Response: Hehe, think you know, do you? All I'll tell you is that it's to drool for. I send all reviews on to Lychee--she apprecieates them.~~RaeWhit
*wipes tears* Smitty read Harry's porn?!? OMG. And Smitty vs. Snape is totally priceless - I was just thinking in chapter 1 that dear Smitty sounded a bit like Snape. The image of him curled up in Snape's drawers is just too good. Delighted to see where all this ends up! :) ~Lee
Okay, I was hooked after the title (and the knowledge that all of Lychee's stories are brilliant), and now I am definitely hooked after this first chapter! So very original and funny. :) ~Lee
Ah, it would be you, dear Lychee. Terribly clever humor as always, and original plot to boot. Well done! Please don't leave this humble reader waiting!
Author's Response: The fic is completely translated, there is a chapter waiting in queue, and the remaining two should be up within the next week.~~RaeWhit
I love this! At last a new perspective on things. And basilisk in SUN GLASSES!? Priceless!