[Report This]Date: 29/03/06 - 01:54 pm Title: The Were Masque
lol. funny and sweet. sev is so adoringly stubborn :)
[Report This]Date: 21/03/06 - 06:12 pm Title: The Were Masque
This was really good and I love a happy ending! *Sigh* :) I love the bit when Remus realized that Severus smelled like rose hips and realized that it had been the same scent on the parchment in his library. Very nice touch! It was also good to see a strong Remus who was not going to let the man he loved get away. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I like the thought of Remus being more than we've been led to believe. And, as a werewolf, I thought he'd have a superior sense of scent. Glad that you liked my story...it's ever so nice be noticed and appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 20/03/06 - 06:15 pm Title: The Were Masque
Cool! A dance I just might be able to do...swinging around under a chandelier, the man who loves you holding you close...Nice imagery!
Author's Response: Thank you. It's fairly lyrical in and of itself. I used to love dancing, the swaying and the subtle seduction in the holds...*le sigh*
[Report This]Date: 20/03/06 - 06:10 pm Title: The Were Masque
Author's Response: When learning new protocols, one must realize which button they are pushing! Thank you for your review, drippy123.
I appreciate the encouragement. Maybe next time, I'll actually respond the correct way? LOL
[Report This]Date: 20/03/06 - 06:07 pm Title: The Were Masque
Ooh! How sweet! What a lovely way to have celebrated Remus' birthday. The snark Snape exhibited was toned down, but, that's foreseeable after war and injury.
I liked how you let them speak like well-read adults! Not something that everyone does. They were professors--you'd figure they not only knew big words, but how to use them effectively.
Hope to see more of your work!
Author's Response: Please see the other "review"...I'm still getting used to this variant yet another fiction software.