I liked it, very enjoyable, but it was a bit distracting how you hopped between past and present tense now and again.
that was a lovely story, it made me feel a bit sad but over all it was happy. I think you really explored Parvati where in the books she was only really an extra.... I believed your Parvati, which really is one of the highest compliments I can give. Thanks for posting this! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Cinimar! We're glad you enjoyed it :)
i really like this story, awesome job!
Author's Response: Thank you, kid_e_katt!