[Report This]Date: 01/12/10 - 07:50 am Title: One
I read this a while ago but never got to the finish of it and I'm so happy I found it again, because it's sooo good. I love Remus blushing at the mention of Gryffindors
Date: 25/03/09 - 07:33 pm Title: Eleven
i love this, its so discriptive. i there any chance of you writing another one set arround later books or after the war? i'd love to read it
Date: 25/03/09 - 12:51 pm Title: Two
i haven't stoped giggaling at this thank you so much *runs to read the rest*
[Report This]Date: 01/10/08 - 04:45 pm Title: Eleven
I was dreaming, I was laughing, I was crying. I think, a part form rare slow scenes, this is one of the best fanfic story I have read about these two HP characters. Although I am not an English native speaker, the plot and fantastic sense of humour get me in.Thank you. Well done really.
[Report This]Date: 18/09/08 - 02:19 am Title: Eleven
Ah, a good ride all in all. Very sad to have Snape just angsting there, but oh, canon. :P Fun smexiness leading up to it though, and quite a romp and hoot indeed! ;p I have a bit more feedback if you would email me, verdenia at gmail. Ta!
[Report This]Date: 17/09/08 - 04:23 am Title: Three
"Well, Harry Potter perhaps, but someone would have to be a seriously perverted deviant to even envision such a twisted pairing." Bwahaha! Love it, too funny. Particularly coming from you, of course. ;p
[Report This]Date: 17/09/08 - 04:12 am Title: Two
Too funny! This is a great start and I'm quite happy to see that there are many more chapters to behold. Pink towels! (perhaps with an embedded charm so that the color is unchangeable?) ;D
[Report This]Date: 31/05/08 - 01:11 pm Title: Eleven
First I'd like to say I was deeply repelled by the scene in the beginning. Lupin dressed as Harry? It seems like Severus had some fantasties about either Harry or James he hadn't fulfilled. And the whip? seemed SM to me. Anyway, great ending of this fantastic and funny story! All in all there was way too much smut, but still a very good job!
[Report This]Date: 13/07/07 - 10:06 pm Title: Eleven
Brilliant!!! Absollutely hilarious- ended rather suddenly though- i would love to see more!!!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:27 pm Title: Eleven
03-15-2007 23:57
ok, so i know what happens imediatly after, but you cant just leve it therer with snape feling betrayed. i know he finds out the truthe eventualy. then what? more please.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:26 pm Title: Eleven
12-17-2006 00:54 Rated 10
WOW!!! That was absolutely amazing. I was so impressed with the dreams foreshadowing what was going to come although all the time I read them, I was hoping against hope they wouldn't come true. This was sad and brilliant. WOW!
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. This story was a lot of fun to write. (well, and a huge pain in the ass too, of course!) I"m quite a slow writer, and generally spend more of my time DRAWING smut, as opposed to writing it. it's much quicker and immediately titillating! :D
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:26 pm Title: Eleven
12-13-2006 21:51 Rated 10
I suppose it was just to much for you to make them to happy? Poor Sev... Great fic, sad ending but it was still wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks! I know, I'm a bit of a sucker for happy endings, myself, but the canon nazis would beat me if I strayed too far. maybe another time.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:25 pm Title: Eleven
12-11-2006 04:39 Rated 10
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! NOT the end! They MUST make up! Damn you, Trippmeister! Why can't you ever let them be happy?!
Author's Response: Hey, write a letter to JKR and complain! Maybe I'll write a fluffy Afterthewar!fic and let them retire together and get old and wrinkly etc......NAH! Angst=smex=hawt stories! :D Thanks for reading, hon!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:25 pm Title: Eleven
12-09-2006 05:55 Rated 9
You CAN'T leave it like that! *starts alternating between running a tin cup along metal bars and babbling like a lunatic.* A magnificent final chapter if somewhat evil in it's ending! And now I'm adding you to my favourite author list so I don't miss your other stories! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm in the process of having a teenage Snupin beta'd. It's more romantic than humourous, but I hope you enjoy it. thanks for your comments.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:24 pm Title: Eleven
12-08-2006 20:16
so sad but beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you! It was hard to go from funny to sad, but I really didn't have a choice. *shakes fists at canon*
I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:24 pm Title: Eleven
12-08-2006 20:02 Rated 10
Wow! Wow! Wow! That scene was hot. And I love the end. Will they ever make up? Will you write another fic about it, please?? Lovely story. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think they'll get back together, perhaps after Sirius dies. You know, comfort in the arms of another, and all that stuff.
I have not yet begun a sequel, but the bunnies are hopping around in my head. I'm just a really slow writer and spend more of my time drawing smutty fan art than writing smutty fan fic!
Thanks for the lovely review!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:23 pm Title: Eleven
12-08-2006 17:28 Rated 10
WOW! What an ending! Woof. Speechless. McGonagall's cameo was perfect. Poor Snape. He is just so hosed. Loved it. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hee! Hosed. You MUST be Canadian. (as am I) I've never heard anyone else use that term. :D
I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. If you'd like to see my art, check out my username at the sister site here, www.shillusions.com I do a LOT more art than fic.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:22 pm Title: Eleven
12-08-2006 17:14 Rated 10
Oh my god!
Such an amazing story!
Once I realised where this was heading I almost couldn't bear to keep reading because I knew they could never last but I'm so glad I did! A very believable account of a possible Remus/Snape fic as well - top marks all round!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you stuck around and enjoyed yourself!
Yes, it's a crappy ending, but my options were limited. Thanks for the lovely feedback!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:22 pm Title: Eleven
12-08-2006 15:57 Rated 10
Aaaagh! The angst, the angst! I can barely stand it!
I guess we'll just have to assuage the pain with more stories of Snape getting lots of sex.
Author's Response: Yes, we'll have to make it up to Snape with some Hawt Monkey Love! ;)
I do have two more fics to upload here. One is a Maurader era Snupin and the other is a Sneville. *hugs Sneville*
I'm also veeeeeery slowly writing a Snarry right now. My Snape is such a whore, he sleeps with everyone! :D
Reader's Response: Well shoot, let me strap one on and get in line, then!
I'm already imagining my own alternative ending to this one (sob). Set, of course (since I'm no fiction writer), after Voldemort's fall. Remus is going to have to be extra-talented with that mouth to get his Snapey back.
Author's Response: *shoves you aside* ME FIRST!! :D
It would seem that Remus' mouth is more than adequate for a good ol' forgiveness blow. After I'm finished the story that I'm working on now, I'll see what i can do! :D
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:21 pm Title: Eleven
12-08-2006 12:43 Rated 9
And thus ends Severus' trust in Remus.
An abrupt end, i wish it were continued but i can understand the reasoning behind it and i think it was very clever how you fit it with in the original story.
Id love you to write another addition, perhaps one using the order of the phoenix where Sirius dies, for i don't like him at all.
(if you write hg/ss at all maybe also writing a Starts With a Spin where they are the main pairing would be fun {for me} and that had a happy ending, this of course is just a request)
once again I'd like to say a great story and hope for another SWS in the near future!
-KarlaMarie
Author's Response: Hee! Sirius isn't my favourite character either, although I felt badly for Harry when he died.
Unfortunately, I pretty much only ship slash, so HG/SS is probably not going to happen, although there's no lack of Snermione on the web!
I have been contemplating a sequel taking place at Grimald Place, but everything I come up with is hawt/angsty, but not funny at all. hardly a sequel then, is it? Thanks so much for the lovely review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:20 pm Title: Eleven
12-08-2006 06:54 Rated 10
Wow -- what an ending. I have to say that, even though the third book is my favourite, I was not expecting you to be so true to cannon. Great job, though!
Author's Response: Oh, but if I made up an alternate ending, the canon police would drag me out from behind my computer and beat me with their Bludgers! *shudders*
I did have a good friend as me to write an alternate ending, and it went something like this:
And then Remus and Severus lived happily and smuttily ever after, with Snape mostly bottoming.
:D
Is that better? :D
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:20 pm Title: Ten
12-06-2006 05:11 Rated 10
Oh my god! You either had someone else write the first few chapters or you went crazy ...I have never laughed/cried so hard reading something(besides "cruel shoes") !!! I'm exhausted...keep it up.Lovely read-really. "something on your cheek" indeed...
Author's Response: Really? It's funny to hear to say that, because to me, this was the least funny of the chapters. Really!! And no, there was no one volunteering to write for me, so I did them all myself ;) However, the first chapter and this chapter were written a long time from each other. I wrote the first couple chapters, then sat on the story for a few months before picking it back up and finishing it. I"m so glad you are enjoying it! One more chapter to go!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:19 pm Title: Ten
12-05-2006 01:34 Rated 10
This Snape reaction to the map's insults is funnier and more original than I could ever have imagined. It hurts -- I shouldn't laugh -- I can't help it. The poor dear.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, life is not kind to poor Snapey! *huggles him*
I'm so glad you're still enjoying this! Only one more chapter to go!
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:19 pm Title: Ten
12-04-2006 14:02 Rated 10
Delicious!
Author's Response: Thanks hon! *smooch*
[Report This]Date: 31/03/07 - 10:18 pm Title: Ten
12-04-2006 04:21 Rated 10
I have a wicked idea of what his wicked idea is.
Author's Response: I'd be interested to know if you're right!