oh my this is so absolutely, stunningly, breathtakingly CUTE! You, my dear, write beautifully, you have a sense of timing and a flow of words that's rarely seen these days. Well done.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much for the kind words.
Perfect, I found this story perfect. And I liked it a lot. Smoke, I also would like to add that I'm following you since The Quest, even if I never let you a review before. You see, I'm Italian and sometimes I don't feel at aise writing what I think about a story, because it is so damn difficult to find few correct words to express my feelings! But now this little story has charmed me in its simplicity and deep tenderness, so I decided to try. You did an excellent job! I hope to read more as good as this from you. I hope also that next time it will be a longer story, like the Quest, which I have greatly enjoyed. Less or no sex, more actions and, above all, feelings! You are very good at making us perceive them. Warm congratulations from sunny Rome.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting, and I'm glad you like my little story. Your English is just fine, and I'm complimented that you made the effort to leave your review.
02-06-2007 09:20 Rated 10
Very sweet! Fun to picture them old...:-)
Author's Response: I love the idea. Let's hope they're both alive at the end of the last book! Thanks for commenting.
Awwww...grumpy old men indeed. :-)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed - thanks for commenting.
02-06-2007 00:09 Rated 9
How sweet! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting!