Love the way you ended the story :) you kept me intrigued all the way through. GREAT READ
Author's Response: Thank you, jellie, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Great story so far, the thought of snape shopping in tesco tickled me :)
Interesting twist on the prompt! and well-managed throughout.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it.
that was a good story! It had just enough character and plot develpment, mixed with some kinky stuff!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Aw, yay! The ending was even better than the previous part ^^ Loved it! Thanks for adding the second part :D
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know it was missing--I wouldn't have known otherwise.
I'm so glad you came back to read the, and even more happy that you enjoyed it.
Is some of the text missing? It seems kind of cut off at the end there. But it's a great story!
Author's Response: It was! Thank you for bringing it to my attention. It was there when I did the preview, but apparently it was too big to post. So I've split it into two chapters if you'd like to finish the story.