uh, this gets better every time I read it! I always feel so sorry for Severus, but not really when he gets licked by Remus. Oh man, this is so good.
Why aren't there more reviews? This one was amazing, really. I'd.. well I wouldn't die, but I'd go through a lot of pain to see a chocolate-covered Severus.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I agree that a chocolate-covered Severus would be a fine thing indeed! I... don't know why there are so few reviews, but I'm very grateful for the ones I do have. So thank you once again for enjoying the story and telling me so. :-)
this was lovely! you really captured all the emotional insecurity, which was actually painful to read, but then all that heat and eroticism, and a happy ending to boot. nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I think that serious relationships can definitely involve an amount of vulnerability that can be painful for a proud, private person like Severus, but it seems to me that it can be worth the effort. Hence the happy ending!
*giggles* Oh, I could think of a few men I'd like to see naked and covered in chocolate, and Severus is definitely one of them! Nice job, you!
Author's Response: Heh, yes! I'm sure there are plenty of us with an interest in chocolate-covered Severus. Thanks for the kind words!