Why aren't there more reviews? This one was amazing, really. I'd.. well I wouldn't die, but I'd go through a lot of pain to see a chocolate-covered Severus.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I agree that a chocolate-covered Severus would be a fine thing indeed! I... don't know why there are so few reviews, but I'm very grateful for the ones I do have. So thank you once again for enjoying the story and telling me so. :-)
this was lovely! you really captured all the emotional insecurity, which was actually painful to read, but then all that heat and eroticism, and a happy ending to boot. nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I think that serious relationships can definitely involve an amount of vulnerability that can be painful for a proud, private person like Severus, but it seems to me that it can be worth the effort. Hence the happy ending!
*giggles* Oh, I could think of a few men I'd like to see naked and covered in chocolate, and Severus is definitely one of them! Nice job, you!
Author's Response: Heh, yes! I'm sure there are plenty of us with an interest in chocolate-covered Severus. Thanks for the kind words!