I really liked everything about this.
omgosh i LOVE this story! it takes realistic things into account during the sex scenes but also does a good job of being sensative to the delecies of its potential readers. its very heart wrentching and heart-warming - i truly enjoyed it. nice job.
keep on writng,
luvblondebunny
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I try really hard to make the sex realistic, I'm glad you thought it was heh :D Thanks for commenting.
Persevero rec'd this story and I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed it. The pacing was perfect-the first half with Severus as the snake, his jealousy of Harry's boyfriends, his decision to leave. Then the second half where they find each other again-gotta love the Kohl, Blackadder, and watching porn together. Excellent story.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment, I really appreciate your kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
Wonderful, original and hot. And Severus wearing kohl!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for the kind comments.
I LOVED it. Especially the eyeliner :D
Author's Response: Haha, thanks :D I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing.
I absolutely loved it! It was well built up and so unique. I can't wait to read another Snarry from you.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment, I appreciate it! And I have a few more ideas for upcoming Snarry stories :D
A wundeful story idea and very well written. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks very much for your kind comment! Story is now complete. :)
A completely different point of view from regular stories, but captivating. How many chapters is it going to be?
Author's Response: There will be two parts. I'm hoping to have the next, and last, one up this upcoming week. Thanks for the comment!