You gotta finish this story. Didn't you know where it was going? Remus has to get through to Snape. Snape needs to grow and they both need resolution. Goodness. I like them both and you write them well...but do finish it!
Wait!!! That's it? You can't just stop there. That is just WRONG! p.s. I agree, you stayed very in character and it added to the appeal greatly.
OH! This is a great story! It's so nice to see a Remus/Severus that's not a one shot. Update soon! 10/10
I love a cruel Snape also... somehow, he's more appealing that way.
I don't mean to be pushy, but -please- continue as soon as is humanly possible! This story is too good- I'm already dying to know what's happening next. Bloody brilliant, your writing is.
This kind of Snape is so new to me. I love it! Much better than the mushier versions of him I see everywhere. Oh, you are spectacular. Your descriptions are so vivid; I see Snape Manor so clearly. And Snape's harshness is so...accurate.
I -loved- this chapter. The entire scene with the Seer was so rich and alive. Simply beautiful.
Beautiful. Eloquent. What I like is that you aren't portraying Snape as an Adonnis. This is probably the most accurate I've ever seen anyone write him. I love the situation they are in.
This story is amazing, and extremely well-written. Please, please continue.
Zyta, this story is amazing. I am loving the pairing and the angst. Although I can rarely get enough Snape--in any form--I really appreciate that your Snape is true to cannon: dark, bastardish, and close. Thank you for sharing your story with us, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.
This is one of the best fanfics I've read, so much so that i decided to leave you my first ever review. I agree with GrrArrg, please don't tell me you've stopped there! I need to know what happens! I beg you, post soon!
Oh My God this is amazing, please don't tell me you've stopped there? I love the interaction between Snape and Lupin, and am desperate to see what happens next. Kisses GrrArrg
This is such a good fic. Why did you stop posting? Please give us more!
This was a great chapter!
Extremely cool scene.
"the cuff of the left leg far to worn and threadbare" you mean "too worn" So far this has gripped me.
This is facinating. I hope you plan to continue the story.
This is facinating. I hope you plan to continue the story.