I swear, you have Draco Malfoy down. I adore his thoughts. Always being Mr. Big Guy, yet just a random thought turns him the other way. It's hilarious and extremely perfect. Excellent!
I just found this recently and I love it. Beautiful. I love how you put them together. You don't rush it at all. It would be very nice if you were to finish it, but I do understand how hard it is to continue something you abandoned long ago. Just know that you gained a fan.
Nice chapter, yet again. No mention of Harry this time, though it's nice to see Cedric's life for a while. One little thing... when you first mention Markus, you switch the spelling of his name several times to Marcus. Just thought you should be aware of that. I really do like your use of descriptions. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Ack! Did I really do that ??? I wasn't sure which spelling I wanted but thought I'd decided on Marcus! Damn! Thanks for the heads-up, I shall amend forthwith!! ;o) I wanted Cedric to have a life quite apart from Harry's (naturally) but they do begin to see much more of each other in upcoming chapters. Thanks for reading ;o)
Author's Response: Crap squared. I've done it again! The boy's name is now and forever more MARKUS HUGHES!! lol ::could I BE any more confused?::
So sweet and tender. You show the awkwardness well. I love the interaction between Remus and Sirius. It all is so right. Excellent story!
Written in 2006, so it's compliant to HBP.
Rated: L
Categories: Severus/Remus
Characters: Other Male Canon Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 10079 - Hits: 637
Complete?: Yes - Published: 25/10/07 - Last Updated: 25/10/07
Man, I was so feeling for Remus. Severus was incredibly Snape-ish. Excellent job.
That was absolutely fantastic. Bloody brilliant. So beautiful and sweet. I LOVE IT! I never thought I'd be a Snupin fan, but I've become one, and you set this up quite nicely. I love how you slowly get them to understand each other. Most people just rush into these things when two people hate each. Not you. You do it exactly how it should be done. Brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's exactly what I was going for - the slow understanding. Funnily enough, I used to be much like you - I was extremely skeptical when introduced to Snupin fic in general - because hey, they hate each other, no way! But I really enjoyed putting together the slow progression of a relationship. Thanks so much for your nice words!
More brilliance here. Quite beautiful, actually. Lovely! Okay, I'm running out of synonyms. *LOL*
You really write some of the best Remus/Severus stories. I didn't used to be a R/S fan, but I've found a few authors, like you, who actually take time to explain exactly how two people who've never liked each other can get together. Thanks for making me a fan.
You are brilliant. I mean it. It's because you let them work towards friendship before getting them into bed together, which is always a treat. ;) I love your Snupin so very much!