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Real name: Lou
Member Since: 07/03/05
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I am in love with Harry Potter Slash. The whole concept of gay wizards is So diabolically British it's sexy. My hardcore ship is Remus/Sirius, this paring seems to canon it hurts. (Though I have been known to read Snape/Remus from time to time) I tend to flip-flop around when it comes to other Canon Characters. I enjoy Harry with Draco or with any Weasley Boy, though not the twins. I believe the Twins should be strictly incestial. XP I think any pairing could be seen as logical if written well, and despise poorly writen works. I've read a good Draco/Neville once or twice in my life. Anyhow, I'm slaving over one fic currently, and well eventually get around to posting on it. I have a few humorous shorts that I believe will be up soon as well.

I do enjoy beta'ing, and can be contacted through AIM, Hotmail and MSNM.

AIM: mylostinnocencex
Email: FatalFallFromGrace@hotmail.com
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Reviews by Lou
Thirteen years after Hogwarts, Harry is summoned back as a professor. He finds that life is leading him in a direction he never thought possible and being a human is far more difficult than anything he's ever battled before

Rated: B
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 3031 - Hits: 2090
Complete?: No - Published: 05/07/04 - Last Updated: 02/10/04
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/03/05 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

I love it!!! LOVE IT!!! Bonds are usually so cliche, but you've made it so interesting, I couldn't help myself but read it. I do hope you complete this soon, or at least ad a few more chapters, I am totally entranced by it. Kudos.

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Rated:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 08/03/05 Title: None

I love the story so far...the build up is keeping me rivitted. I love this chapter just because you decided to name your seventh year Slytherin prefect Laurel. (my real name!! I never see it anywhere!! *squee*) Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! <3 I'm glad you like the story. :) And I was looking for flower names to name girls, which is how Laurel came to be. It is such a beautiful name, you're lucky to have it as your first name. :))

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/03/05 Title: None

Yes!! I love this fic, and I hope and pray you'll update soon. Blaise and Draco and beautifully written, and the flirting scene...brilliant! My #1 reason for loving this of course, is the use of my name as a Slytherin Prefect, even if it wasn't intentional! (My real name is Laurel for those who did not see previous comments)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. <3

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 15/03/05 Title: None

Yes! Cruel/Sarcastic!Draco. I love him. You keep them so well in character, and you make the chemistry so utterly perfect. I LOVE it!! do write more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm flattered that you can still love Draco despite his cruelness. <3

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 17/03/05 Title: None

This story is just so great, I'm review again (lol) I re-read this chapter, and I'm in love with the "best-friends-previously-lovers" chemistry Blaise and Draco have. They're so comfortable with eachother, and amusing it makes me giggle. This was my favorite part: Blaise guffawed. "Oh, but in that case I shall have to practise my moves," he said, suddenly turning sideways and pressing Draco against the wall. They were next to the Slytherin common room by then. Blaise placed a hand on the wall on Draco's left. His voice dropped several octaves and he affected a lisp. "I'll be the Thlytherin thtar, reprethenting uth to the world," he murmured into his ear. Draco grinned and pressed his hand against Blaise's chest to push him away. Just gotta love Blaise the "Thlytherin Thtar" lol.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing! :) I'm grateful that you enjoy the Blaise-Draco interaction and the chemistry. Blaise is the only one Draco lets get away with murder because of it and they're a lot of fun to write together. Glad you liked Blaise's little joke. :)) <333

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 21/03/05 Title: None

And again, you do the most incredible job with this story. Somehow I knew it was going to be Nott, and when you started saying they suspected Seamus, it made me laugh out loud. Seamus, of all people. that's just like Draco. I love how you build everything up, and how great you make this whole House Unity Project thing work out. People usually fluff it up and make the characters OOC, but your great. The ending like was priceless. Of course Draco's not worried about Harry, not at all. lol. Loved it, this is my favorite story of all time (and I mean it) I check everyday to see if you update (right after checking my email lol) so don't keep me waiting for the next chapter! Kudos Kudos. - Lou

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Glad the Seamus thing gave you a chuckle; Draco is irascible, isn't he? :D I'm dead chuffed you enjoy the house unity stuff. I'm very flattered that you like the story. <333

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 28/03/05 Title: None

When I saw they were playing "Darling If You Love Me" I knew we were in for a treat. I say it time and time again, I love your Draco. He leant close to the other boy's ear. What would Potter do if Draco were to lick it? Weasley was too close, though, he might see it. "Darling, if you love me, won't you please smile?" Draco said in a deliberately breathy voice, struck by the improbability of the situation -- the odds of Draco ever saying something like this to Potter were slim to none. He atleast admits the urge to lick Harry this time, but is still his cocky self. Harry amuses me as well, with him being so concerned about Pansy, but Draco's additude back is beautiful. After all, he's Slytherin. "But what about you and Pansy Parkinson?" There was an edge of panic in his voice that made Draco very happy. But my favorite line: "Of course I noticed, I'm neither blind nor straight. Doesn't mean I'm going to let him shag me." All and all you are a wonderful writer, and I'm sure with the twists and turns you through into this story, it will never be dull. I am eager to find out just why Draco's father died. In the words of Alice in Wonderland, this story keeps getting "Curiouser and Curiouser." Beautiful, Kudos. Again, I love it. <333 Lou

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wondeful feedback! I'm so happy you are enjoying the story! <33333

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 13/04/05 Title: None

Yes Yes!! You did it, and I love you. The story was beautiful. It was heart wrenching at the same time, but I loved every minute of it. The Godric's Hollow scene was genius, and I think Draco's path to understanding his life as a whole was well ploted and beautiful. I'm going to stop babbling because we all know I'll re-read this and comment half a dozen times more. Kudos and all my love! Laurel (your Slytherin Prefect)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed the ending and I'm really glad you liked the story as a whole. <333

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Rated:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/03/05 Title: None

Haha!! This fic was perfect, with the mannerisms and one-liners. " 'Of--of course. I-I'll let him know you're gay--I mean, on your way,' Harry said quickly, purpling in embarrassment. Draco snickered at this. "Thank you, Harry. And how are you and Draco this morning?" Remus asked, trying desperately to act like everything was normal. "We're straight--I mean, great," Harry squeaked. Draco burst into howls of laughter and tossed Snape's underwear at him. Harry turned and glared at him, peeling Snape's drawers off his face with the utmost indignation and disgust." This was just perfect...I laughed out loud and scared a few other people occupying the room. "Harry really liked how he and God become one person as Draco degenerated into incoherent babble" This made me grin, I enjoy how cocky Harry seemed in that statement. Overall, this was a fabulous fic, and it has earned a spot on my favourites! Kudos, Kudos!

Author's Response: Hee hee! Thank you so much! You're making me blush. Glad you enjoyed it so much!

Remus/Bill. Bill does what it takes to win Remus over, including tussles with gods and bartenders.

Rated: L
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Weasley
Genres: Mystery/suspense
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 7098 - Hits: 468
Complete?: Yes - Published: 30/01/05 - Last Updated: 30/01/05
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 31/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Sons of an Angry God

all I have to say: "So it is red everywhere..." Kudos.

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Rated:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/03/05 Title: None

AHH! This can't be a one shot, can it? Such a cliff hanger!! I am pleased with your way of portraying Voldemort, very canon.

Author's Response: Nope! Not a one shot by any means. Updates will be coming reggularly, if a bit slowly. I'm hoping every other week or so. Unfortunately, this is one of several WiPs for me, so it has to share my muse.

Thank you for your comments about Voldemort. This was my second attempt to portray him. The first was simply horrendous-- I was going for the evil overlord with him and it just sounded campy. I was much more pleased with this version, and I'm glad he was believable.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

Jen

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/03/05 Title: None

Wow...this story just keeps getting better and better. I love how this is slowly developing, I'm sure this story will be nothing short of amazing.

Author's Response: *nailbites*

Such high expectations after two chapters! I hope I don't disappoint!

Seriously, if you're hoping for a slow-developing exploration of a relationship, I think you're in the right place ;)

Thanks for the comments!

Jen

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 25/03/05 Title: None

Beautiful. don't worry about my high expectations for this story, your meeting them with every chapter you dish out for my reading pleasure. This slowly developing relationship is wonderful. "If Lupin were here, I’d let him kiss me. The thought came out of nowhere, and it made him stumble slightly, which put a scowl on his face. What a preposterous, ridiculous, absurd thing to think. He put the thought firmly from his head." haha, I loved that! And of course, Lupin returns to his head over..and over. ^__^ I'm anticipating the next interaction between these two. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying, and I'm glad you're geared up for a slow-developing relationship ;)

Thanks for your comments! Jen

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 26/04/05 Title: None

I'm still geared up for this slow building relationship, and the developments in this chapter were absolutely satisfying. The paper cut scene was brilliant...I could just imagine them in the kitchen like that. You've taken them to the next step, but done it without being sloppy and rushing in. I enjoy that. Kudos again, five stars and what not. I am a mesmerized reader indeed. and you my friend, are one rad author.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so thrilled that you're enjoying. I'm really trying hard to strike the balance between slow-building and not boring my readers senseless. I'm glad I'm succeeding!

Jen

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 20/05/05 Title: None

wowza, you are my hero. I'm in shock and strapped for time, so my reveiw isn't as lengthly as usual, but I think I've said what needs to be said. You. Are. My. Hero.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed.

Jen

Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/07/05 Title: None

brilliant. I think I use tht word too often when reviewing your fiction, but I find it fitting. I enjoy the tension, and expecially the complexity of it all. their life doesn't exist in a vaccum, and it will be interesting to see how the world reacts. I enjoy the difference in veiws between the men as well, and I am eager for your update!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying. I've been really lax in answering reviews, and I hope you'll forgive me that. Thanks for your comments!

Jen

Remus reluctantly steps out of his familiar world, only to be claimed by someone he never thought possible.

Rated: L
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Weasley
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3967 - Hits: 789
Complete?: Yes - Published: 23/02/05 - Last Updated: 23/02/05
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star
Date: 31/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Poker Night

HAHA! It was hot..and good...and AT LEAST YOU COULD DO IT WHERE I COULD SEE!!!! hahaha! good job.

“What you did was out us rather abruptly. ‘Well and thoroughly shagged.’ Really Severus, I about died.” In this sequel Snape deals with the repercussions of his actions in A Question of Preference

Rated: L
Categories: Severus/Remus
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 9754 - Hits: 4405
Complete?: Yes - Published: 27/02/05 - Last Updated: 28/02/05
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Capter 1 of 1

YESSSSS!!!! This made me laugh...HARD! I loved the on going inside jokes, and how nicely this wrapped up. It's good. Nice Job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's lovely feedback. Cheers!

Sirius wishes he could take the cup of suffering from Remus.

Rated: B
Categories: Slash
Characters: Remus Lupin
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1758 - Hits: 643
Complete?: Yes - Published: 06/03/05 - Last Updated: 06/03/05
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: (none)

Haunting. But utterly beautiful. I love your take on feelings from them both, but my only question was...where are the others? Not that it perticularly matters...it just makes me curious. ^__^ Good Work.

Author's Response: Haha, I wondered that myself when I was writing it. I was like, "Shouldn't the other two be here?" I guess I primarily wanted to focus on their relationship, and I guess having the other two there was, for me, going to take away that from that effect. Or maybe they were there - they were just watching. Either way, I wanted it to be just those two and how this pinnacle of time affected them. Thanks for reading! I am glad you enjoyed it!

Bourbon and games in a tent with one bed lead to: light bondage, straight boy seducing gay one (or is that the other way around?). For the "Altered States" challenge on the LJ community pervy_werewolf; a gift for Arionrhod.

Rated: W
Categories: Slash
Characters: Bill Weasley
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2373 - Hits: 564
Complete?: No - Published: 31/03/05 - Last Updated: 31/03/05
Reviewer: Lou Signed star star star star star
Date: 31/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Truth or Dare

Woooo Baby. I'm quivering Leo, Quivering. That was hot hot hot, and it best not be a stand alone, because I would love to see more! Well done and Kudos.