You gotta finish this story. Didn't you know where it was going? Remus has to get through to Snape. Snape needs to grow and they both need resolution. Goodness. I like them both and you write them well...but do finish it!
I was with you when Albus came for Severus. Nicely written. You lost me at the rape of Harry and thus, the betrayal of Severus. How about you put your powers to good use and write me a story about Albus/Severus and have them mean it? I like that pairing..AD/SS...You write well.
Nice. Loved it!
Nice. Loved it!
Gods you can make a girl cry. Have you tried your hand at an AU...one where they both make it out alive?
No...don't give up on Albus/Severus. It makes way more sense than how it turned out...yes, I know...politically incorrect to say such a thing about Canon, but politically incorrect is so overated at times. Write more. I am making a website specifically for AD/SS. I liked this story. Nicely written. Moving. Good.
This too...very nice!
Ooooo....Albus, Albus, Albus:). I like that you write Albus just a little bit dark. It is more realistic. I just found this fic and am a big AD/SS fan. This was very good! Thanks for writing cannot wait for more...please, please, please.
This is so beautiful. I just think more people need to write AD/SS. Of course, Severus works with so many pairings:) and I love them all. He is nummy of course! But I feel that for everything Sev did and everything Al asked...their love had to be more than what was written. That leaves it us:) and what fun to write. I am starting an archive of AD/SS...yours is so beautiful I hope you would consider archiving on my site. It made me cry in that happy beautiful kind of way. Thanks for writing. Hope to see more AD/SS from you.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so very much, what a wonderful comment. You're welcome to archive this on your site if you'd like to. :)
This was soooooo beautiful...so much so I don't know what to say. I bow to your pen! It moved me and that is a compliment most high. Thank you!
So glad to see a story from you again! Loved it! Well, written as usual. Cliches a blast. Characterization is perfect! It had humor and tears and smiles...and just perfect all of it! Thanks for writing!