hi! just thought maybe i'd see if you had written any snupin yourself. i liked this very much. i liked how you have snape watching him - i've always seen snape like that, too. i see in a review response you mentioned sequels, so i'll have to see if i can find those.
what the hell! i love this story, starting with the title. and i love the way you write snupin. i enjoyed that you gave snape a puppy in this story. unexpected, yet completely in character the way you set up this story. :D
this is lovely. very sweet the way you built the relationship. it's funny because i never think about remus having a facade - severus, yes, but him, not so much - but it definitely worked in this story. *happy sighs*
this was lovely! you really captured all the emotional insecurity, which was actually painful to read, but then all that heat and eroticism, and a happy ending to boot. nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I think that serious relationships can definitely involve an amount of vulnerability that can be painful for a proud, private person like Severus, but it seems to me that it can be worth the effort. Hence the happy ending!
i like this. you tell a lot of story in a few words, and it fits in with my imaginings about what their relationship might have been.
Author's Response: Thak you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
i really liked this. you had me giggling over poor snape trying to avoid the amorous advances of wolf!lupin, and i appreciated that subtle little turn of phrase that gave him the greenlight once he was back in human form. :)
i really loved this story. you had me howling with laughter in the beginning, when severus realizes the ... sacrifices he's willing to make in order to save remus from the weasleys. and then, my eyes actually teared up a bit when he witnessed the kiss and thought he was losing the battle. perfect combination of funny and touching, and with a happy ending to boot. :D
stupid computer ate my review! to recap - not a big percy fan, but love your writing, so took a chance, and LOVED this. funny, sexy, and also rather sweet in the way you depict the relationship between remus and severus. :D
Author's Response: Thank you for giving Percy a chance - he does try very hard in this story - and I'm glad that he didn't disappoint you. And thanks for leaving the comment, especially when the first got eaten!