OooOOoo, great lemon! The story around it was a bit random, as was the ending, but hilariously... hilarious. I loved the house! :D Evil and ghastly... just my kinda thing. And submissive Malfoy was good too ^_~. There was also a harsh sense of realism... like the whole thing where "a drop of piss ran down his leg" HOW MANY PEOPLE WRITE ABOUT THAT? Well, it made you a great fic, so I'm not complaining... ^_^
X3 Remus is a great character in the fic. I felt so sorry for him when he thouht Severus didn't care! TT_TT Poor Remus. And Severus is being a git... who cares whether the Dark Lord gets him? As long as he participates in several lemons beforehand, of course. It's the for the greater good... of the readers, right? Ehehe. Aw, I care about him really. It actually scared me the way Remus was constantly thinking about random big-boobed women at the beginning, but it just shows he truly appreciates Severus, right? I loved the Sirius-Remus interaction. Poor Sirius. I just wanna make Remus hug him and call him Paddy-poo. ¬_¬ Anyway, update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic and the interactions.
Jen
Aah! Aww... TT_TT That ending was just sublime. *hugs the ending* You really know how to tug the heartstrings, don't you? Poor Severus! Poor Remus! *hugs them both* That counting thing worked so well. And Remus at the beginning? *glomp*
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed. I do try to tug the heartstrings, yes ;)