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Third in the Corruption Sequence - Harry has returned to Hogwarts after Dumbledore took charge of the situation at Malfoy Manor, but is he safe from the Ministry and is the world safe from him?

Rated: L
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 9054 - Hits: 5541
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/08/04 - Last Updated: 03/08/04
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Date: 09/12/05 Title: Chapter 5: Alteration (Corruption 3) 5/5

The best. What more can I say? Amazingly original plot (IMHO) and wonderfully well written.

Draco wants Harry to know just who his daddy is! Dark and angsty Harry/Draco slash; contains sexual situations, romance, and rape, though not necessarily in that order.

Rated: W
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1314 - Hits: 808
Complete?: Yes - Published: 16/11/04 - Last Updated: 16/11/04
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Date: 29/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: Say My Name

It's not that dark! Draco's uncertainty and neediness was really well written. I loved it, great job.

Draco and Harry are trapped in the Dursleys’ cellar and get to spend some quality time together. Well, it’s that, or dig their way out with clothes-pegs. Along the way are conversations about underwear, a bit of snogging, and other things.

Rated: B
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2476 - Hits: 1333
Complete?: Yes - Published: 28/11/04 - Last Updated: 02/12/04
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Date: 29/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Great funny story, but would have been better with a plot. Draco's cute. Any longer stories in the making? *hint hint* :D

Author's Response: Well, plot really wasn't that important in this ficlet. It was just supposed to be funny, which it apparently is. And longer stories? Well, I haven't written HP in over a year... So no, no longer stories planned. Sorry. ~ sera

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 22/11/05 Title: None

That was a really really good story. Awesome job! I didn't really like the ending a lot, it seemed like it was missing something. You really showed Slytherin customs and attitudes well and I liked how Draco was a bit of a bastard to the end. You kept him and most other characters as canon, and if it weren't for the Draco POV it could have been J.K. Rowling. I guess the ending did fit with your story. Now I'm rambling. Well written. Kudos to you :P

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed reading this! :D

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 11/11/05 Title: None

Awesome story, I just wish you had written a little more for the ending. Draco and Harry's realtionship was developed slowly and very well. I loved Contessa and i wanted to see her have a good life in the end. I also wanted Snape to have a better life as well. Of course, then it would have been a perfect world, and as such, impossible. I like how you kept Draco so original and Slytherin, as well as starting to brave. Their families also were really well developed and I really, really liked Draco speaking French. It was so CUTE!!!Are you planning a sequel or anything? Not that you need one, but I just want to know what happens to everyone after the war. Do Draco and Harry end up together? Did Contessa die? WHat happens to Snape? Were the answers to all these questions in your story, and was I just too stupid to see them? Really good job on this story and I hope I get to read more of your fanfic:)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The ending does fall a little short, and I may rewrite it sometime to or add an epilogue. :D I appreciate the feedback a lot, and glad you liked the fic overall.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 27/11/05 Title: None

Ha! I really love your stories. Awesome, as always

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. :D

“What you did was out us rather abruptly. ‘Well and thoroughly shagged.’ Really Severus, I about died.” In this sequel Snape deals with the repercussions of his actions in A Question of Preference

Rated: L
Categories: Severus/Remus
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 9754 - Hits: 4254
Complete?: Yes - Published: 27/02/05 - Last Updated: 28/02/05
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Date: 24/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: Capter 1 of 1

OMG!!!!!! **melts into a puddle at your feet** That was the funniest, cutest story I have read in a while. You are an awesome writer. I love the sexy Snape in your story and Lupin was cut too...but Snape was the show stealer. I really really loved both the stories in this series. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your stories. I think this is the first story of yours that I have read, so I don't know if you've written any more, but have you written Harry/Draco fanfic? I am a HUGE fan of HP/DM and I would LOVE to read it if your Draco is anything like Snape...**begs** ENCORE and three thumbs waaaay up!!!!!!!

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 24/11/05 Title: None

Great job on this one...consider making it a longer fic? please..... *looks up, eyes shining with tears*......*waits for you to start yelling*

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! There won't be yelling, but I don't have much drive left for HP fic. :S Sorry, but I aprpeciate the fb.

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Date: 24/11/05 Title: None

Great job on this one...consider making it a longer fic? please..... *looks up, eyes shining with tears*......*waits for you to start yelling*

Author's Response: Thanks again.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star half star
Date: 15/11/05 Title: None

Good story. Well written. The relationship is developed slowly and well, much better than if you had just made them fall in love quickly. I also like how you kept Snape pessimistic and cold, even as he had his relationship with Lupin instead of making him sappy. You are a good author and I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much. I really aprpeciate that. :D

Every month for the last three years, Snape and Lupin have played a game wherein Lupin must humble himself to request that Snape graciously brew his Wolfsbane. This month, though, Snape changes the rules.

Rated: B
Categories: Severus/Remus
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5152 - Hits: 2866
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/05/05 - Last Updated: 09/05/05
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star star
Date: 24/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

OMG!!!!! 15/10 You are an absolutely brilliant writer. I loved the parallels between Lupin's and Snape's journeys. Please write a sequel where Lupin finds out because I feel so sorry for Snape now, even though I hated him when he made Lupin beg for the potion."I want you to want me," Severus said softly, placing a gentle kiss on Remus' temple. "I want you to love me the way you don't realize that I love you. But I don't want to wonder if you say it because you want me to brew that damn potion for you. I'm going to brew the potion every month, whether you ask it or not. I'd do anything to make this transformation easier for you..." AAWWWWWWWW...that was so sweet, I almost cried.....*BLESS* and keep writing...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. Jen

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Date: 24/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

sorry, me again...i need to rave some more. Loved how you kept Snape so evil and hate-able as well as sweet and prickly about it. I love H/D and don't usually read SS/RL, but after this one, i'm thinking that i'm missing out. love gryffindor/slytherin pairings i guess. U r awesome and i really think you should write a sequel because Snape is making me cry right now...jjk, actually i think you ended it really well...so it pulls just right on the heartstrings....k i WILL stop reviewing now....must..stop..

Author's Response: If you're not reading Snupin, you're definitely missing out on a lot of great fic. Not that I'm biased or anything, mind you ;)

Seriously, thank you. It's a wonderful compliment from someone who isn't inherently in love with this pairing.

Thanks!

Jen

Harry daydreams during Potions class, and reminisces over the events of the past year. Follow-up to Then He Opened His Mouth.

Rated: W
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 6147 - Hits: 600
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/05/05 - Last Updated: 10/05/05
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star
Date: 24/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: In Dreams

awwww...loved Draco at the end and the 'first time' was written really well. It was awesome, how could it be anything else;)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Harry watches Draco as they make their way back to Hogwarts.

Rated: B
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 819 - Hits: 637
Complete?: Yes - Published: 20/05/05 - Last Updated: 21/05/05
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star
Date: 20/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: Movement

good story, but i really want u to keep going....

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll eventually get the sequel done.

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star star
Date: 20/10/05 Title: None

That was a really beautiful story...It kind of dragged on in the beginning, but i found that i liked it. you are a wonderful writer. i want to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! <3

All in all, Harry thought Draco Malfoy was looking very gay indeed....

Rated: L
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3300 - Hits: 1439
Complete?: Yes - Published: 23/08/05 - Last Updated: 24/08/05
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star
Date: 04/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: Queer As Malfoy

Funny. good job

Because Draco Malfoy is an oppressed little boy-- er-- man. Also known as `Draco's Foolproof Plan To Kill Potter Dead This Time'.

Rated: B
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2876 - Hits: 906
Complete?: Yes - Published: 23/08/05 - Last Updated: 24/08/05
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star
Date: 04/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: Draco Malfoy Strikes Back

God!!! that was hilarious...Draco was HOT...and obsess-er..oppressed...That was an awesome story.

Written for the Hex Files August Challenge: No word limit, but must be a one-shot. The last line of the challenge must read "Shut up and kiss me." (Must be in quotes). Harry returns to Hogwarts to find Draco Malfoy a broken man. He vows to help him – can he succeed? Contains HBP spoilers. Written in two parts.

Rated: B
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: HBP Spoilers

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 7379 - Hits: 1402
Complete?: Yes - Published: 30/08/05 - Last Updated: 31/08/05
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/10/05 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

AAWWWW...that was the sweetest story ever. I loved Draco and it was such a cute story because it was so innocent...Pls. write more...

Author's Response: I am so pleased that you enjoyed it! Thank you for your kind words. : )

Written for the Hex Files September Challenge. Harry is shocked to find one of his former classmates is a centrefold in a magazine

Rated: B
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 8496 - Hits: 1241
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/10/05 - Last Updated: 14/10/05
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star star
Date: 19/10/05 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet September

i liked your story with the hurt Draco better, but this one's cute too. Draco was a little too nice for my taste. I think he has to be a little more snarky...but what do I know, I'm not a writer. That was a really good story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed both of my stories. In this one, I see Draco as being so happy to have survived, that his whole outlook changed. He has embraced life in a positive way. I'm sure that he still has his snark and pulls it out when needed. : )

War affects everyone differently, and old battles will bring old enemies together in an unlikely way.

Rated: W
Categories: Harry/Draco
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 645 - Hits: 1113
Complete?: Yes - Published: 18/10/05 - Last Updated: 23/11/05
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star
Date: 15/11/05 Title: Chapter 6: Five

This is a truly beautiful story. It is really well written and I love the relationship and closeness betweeen Draco and Harry. The ending was rather abrupt. I read the last lines of chapter 5 and stared blankly at the place where the arrow to the next chapter should have been. I felt like I was cut off quite suddenly and I had to go back and make sure there really were only 5 chapters to your story. Do you have a sequel or anything planned? Otherwise, I loved this story and I couldn't wait to see the relationship developed further. Great Job!

Author's Response: There's a few more chapters to go. I'm uploading them as soon as the others get put into the archive. :D I'm glad you're enjoying it, thank you so much for reading. :D

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Date: 24/11/05 Title: Chapter 10: Nine.

Really loved the story. It seemed short and hurried, and I usually like stories that are longer and more detailed, but that was the way their love was. You did a really good job. ;D

Remus has Severus right where he wants him, up against the wall. And don't tell anyone, but it's right where Severus wants to be too.

Rated: L
Categories: Severus/Remus
Characters: None
Genres: PWP
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 572 - Hits: 1051
Complete?: Yes - Published: 07/11/05 - Last Updated: 07/11/05
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Date: 15/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: Need

Well written....WRITE MORE!! Loved seeing Snape so close to the edge and Remus taunting him, but Remus seems AU...As your wonderful beta said, "I need to see what’s next! Haha! Nah, my imagination is working overtime!" Except i really do need to see what's next. Awesome work!

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 15/11/05 Title: None

AWWWWW.....I think it would have been better if you had an actual plot and it was a longer story. Draco and Harry got together quite quickly, but I LIKED it. Draco was very cute, in a snarky, Slytherin way, of course. Bravo!! Encore!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I agree that it could use an actual plot, maybe I'll rewrite it to fit in with HBP canon. :-D

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 15/11/05 Title: None

It was a sweet story, didn't have a plot but it was hilarious. Good one-shot...unless you wanted to make it more...;D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it gave you a giggle. :>

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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: s0_0s Signed star star star star
Date: 14/11/05 Title: None

Really good story. Well written. You really feel for Draco and I like their relationship

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed it.