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Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 31/12/69 - Last Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed 
Date: 23/11/05 Title: None
Date: 23/11/05 Title: None
interesting. Very intrigued and wanting to read more. Contessa is a great character - enjoying her existence very much.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate that!
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed 
Date: 23/11/05 Title: None
Date: 23/11/05 Title: None
Very good, very good. Obviously Morpheus is the new DADA teacher. And in keeping with canon, you have him meet Harry before the school year. So many people neglect this little detail and it is a shame. Haha to Sev. If he wasn't such a mean bugger to Neville, he wouldn't still cop the flack over the boggart. Enjoying this very very much.
Author's Response: Ahahaa, thanks a lot. Glad you like it so far. :D
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 23/11/05 Title: None
Date: 23/11/05 Title: None
Godric the snake! Love it! I can see we will have fun with this one. Excellent chapter. Get the feeling Contessa is a good person. I like her. Doing well. Enjoying this story alot! j_a
Author's Response: Ahahah, Godric was my personal favorite. :D Thank you very much!
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 25/11/05 Title: None
Date: 25/11/05 Title: None
I am liking Contessa more and more as this story progresses. I do hope she turns out to be good (if a little acerbic). Yes, i quite agree with Lupin liking Sirius. The thing is, i think Sirius was a bit of a ladies man, tho, i could see him with Lupin. Great Fic!
j_a
Author's Response: Thanks again! Glad you liked Contessa, she was fun to write. Sirius is a dog, in all senses. ;)
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 25/11/05 Title: None
Date: 25/11/05 Title: None
yes, i do believe Harry's feelings of betrayal.
As For Harry and Draco in the room, so close...so close...yet so tantalisingly far away. Excellent!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks a lot! :D
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 02/12/05 Title: None
Date: 02/12/05 Title: None
Oh yes. Made me cry. Alice and Frank... Very well done.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks a lot!
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 02/12/05 Title: None
Date: 02/12/05 Title: None
Wondering what Lucius will do with the info. Hmmmmmm. Loving this fic so very very much. j_a
Author's Response: Hee, you'll see. :D Thanks.
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 02/12/05 Title: None
Date: 02/12/05 Title: None
Always thought Blaise Zabini was a dark horse. Most intrigued by this character. Wondering how Draco will survive the night in the den of snakes, now he is a blood traitor.
j_a
Author's Response: Well, my Blaise was created prior to the release of HBP, but I was pleased to find he was fairly consistent with what JKR had in mind. :D
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Draco's translations are bloody priceless! Got a massive laugh out of this chapter. Good work! j_a
Author's Response: Hee, thanks! :D
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Excellent chapter! Draco just gets funnier and funnier. Good to see you are not rushiong things with Draco and Harry - so many people have them snog and then straight into the sex, or they get all angsty (which is not a bad thing, but there is only so much one little angel can take). I can actually see Severus with the Absinthe. Just the right drink for a man like him. Perfect.
j_a
Author's Response: Thanks again! I had fun with htos ebits, and absinthe really does suit Snape quite well.
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
you know, normally, i don't really like new characters in fanfic, but Morpheus and Contessa are fantastic. What more can i say? j_a
Author's Response: Wow, high priase indeed. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
I wasn't sure about this whole bringing Sirius back to life business, but now he is here,i am very pleased to see him again. The whole Netherworld piece was a bit 'Alice in Wonderland' and i liked it. Good show! j_a
Author's Response: Ahahha, yaye! You caught the Alice in Wonderland bit. :D Thanks!
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
oh yes, this is exactly how i imagined Sirius - flirty, naughty, gorgeous. I have a poster from 'Prisoner of Azkaban' on my wall that is of Sirius. Yum! Thank you for bringing him back to life and doing such a godd job of him.
The interlude...you are making us twist and turn trying to keep up with your story. deeper and darker and into gnarled little holes, sliding one way and then the other. Absolutely beautiful.
j_a
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! I love Sirius to death, truly. :D And I'm glad you like all the story twists!
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Yeh, man! Good sex scene. No soppiness, no silly euphemisms, no rubbish. Just a very well written piece that says it all, and at least it was not perfect sex. It was a bit clumsy and uncoordinated - as first sex should be. And on top of all that, it was described as two men having sex, not like a boy and a girl, or some ridiculous graphic description of every inch that doesn't matter. Happy!
And the after sex stuff is good too. No goopy crap. Check. Two blokes. Check. No soppy 'loves'. Check. Still the same lads they were before. Check. Happy angel! j_a
Author's Response: Ahahah, thanks. I'm glad that worked for you. I don't like perfect sex with soppy emotions that turn one of the characters into girls at all, and I tried to be a little more realistic. :D
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
ok. I am going to have to ask a question here. I am in Australia and it is 7.30 pm here, but the clock over the review says it is like 3 in the morning (i guess it is set to the States somewhere). So, i see you replying to my reviews and i am wondering: are you really up at 3am, or are you in a more godly hour like i am?
BTW. Another spectacular chapter. Contessa just gets better all the time. j_a
Author's Response: Hee, thanks again!
It's actually almost 4am here, and yes, I'm up this late. I keep very strange hours, especially since I'm writing a Star Wars fic right now. ;)
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
the fight between Sirius and Contessa is great. It's making me laugh out loud. They should have been twins. They are so alike.
Poor Neville. He really is such a sweet lad.
The French pieces are nice. Lucky Harry can't speak French, he might just think Draco was a bit of a softie. I just think it is sweet that Draco can say what he feels out loud whilst knowing that Harry can't understand what he is saying. He can get away with anything.
I must say, i do love the song. I have heard it and enjoyed it and it is so appropriate for this section of the fic.
Gruesome way to die - but they refused to play nicely. j_a
Author's Response: Hee, thank you very much! Sirius and Contessa were a ball to write. Glad you liked all the things in this chapter. :D
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
'Right, right'? Has someone been watching the Clockwork Orange? Well, i can see the similarities between Sirius and Alex - the recklessness, the idea that they can get away with whatever they want, the child-like attitudes. Even if this was not intentional, it fits the moment.
Loving the bickering between Sev, Contessa and Sirius. Very funny. j_a
Author's Response: Hee! I haven't watched A Clockwork Orange in a few years, so the comparisons weren't intentional, but it's funny that it sort of holds up. Thanks.
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
no reviews on this chapter yet? haha! I am the first! You have such an excellent way with words. And again, the sex was great. Yes, it is realistic and describes two men together very well. j_a
Author's Response: And thank you again, very pleased you liked it. :D
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
cliff hanger. I cannot put this story away. You have caught me. j_a
Author's Response: :D Thank you again.
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Push, shove, twist, turn. Who is light, who is dark? Crocodiles do snap fast, don't they? Having so much fun!
Author's Response: :D Glad you like!
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
oh yeh, oh yeh. Remus and Sirius. About time! Yes! So good, so right.
Morpheus! twist! oh you, you are sooo bad. Talk about out of left field. I wasn't watching that guy closely enough, was i? Silly me. j_a
Author's Response: Hee! :D Remus and Sirius are love. Glad I surprised you with Morph. :D
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
ohhhh yes. Good stuff. I was hoping Lucius would do something with that information. Still not a good boy, but at least not with old Voldie. j_a
Author's Response: :D Lucius is an interesting sort.
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Date: 03/12/05 Title: None
Go Neville! Go Neville!
Voldie's death was magnificent. I really love this ending for him. This is a piece of genius. I quite agree that Harry is going to have to do something just like this to get rid of Voldemort. Excellent!
I have had the most fun reading your fic and hope to find more in the near future. Thank you. j_a
Author's Response: Thak you for all your lovely feedback. I'm really happy you liked the fic and the ending. Much appreciated. :D
A younger Lucius “sponsors” Severus into the Death Eaters, teaching him the value of submission. This ficlet is canon to the same alternate world as For Someone Special (FSS, which can be viewed over at RestrictedSection.org under this same pen-name).
Rated: L
Categories: Slash
Characters: Lucius Malfoy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3385 - Hits: 1073
Complete?: Yes - Published: 15/01/05 - Last Updated: 18/01/05
Rated: L
Categories: Slash
Characters: Lucius Malfoy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3385 - Hits: 1073
Complete?: Yes - Published: 15/01/05 - Last Updated: 18/01/05
Reviewer: jagged_angel Signed
Date: 02/12/05 Title: Chapter 1: Frogs In Winter 02
Date: 02/12/05 Title: Chapter 1: Frogs In Winter 02
oh dear god, where is lesson two? Please write one! j_a