[Report This]Date: 07/09/04 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Hia I love this story, I hope there'll be more soon. It would be nice to have a bit more of Ron and class time etc.:)
[Report This]Date: 21/08/04 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Five
Your writing improves with each new chapter. The character development is good, although there are a few things i don't understand...in future chapters maybe? nice work
[Report This]Date: 28/07/04 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Five
God this is good stuff - I really like your writing, and I love how you've portrayed Malfoy. Keep going, please!
[Report This]Date: 27/07/04 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter One
i really like the way this story is developing. i hope you will continue posting. i think your characterization of hp is brilliant and, i think, one of the more realistic post-war personas he could take on. i also like your use of voldermorts skull, showing that harry hasnt quite let go yet. anyway...great story :)
[Report This]Date: 07/07/04 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter Five
Well I must say, that Voldemort skull is a little macabre. I think Harry couls use some therapy. But the story is still interesting.
[Report This]Date: 06/07/04 - 09:35 am Title: Chapter Two
Wow, I can't believe that Ron didn't recognize Harry. Even if life has been hard on Harry. I mean, Hermione recognized him. I can't wait for Harry to get back a spark of life. I feel so bad for him.
[Report This]Date: 06/07/04 - 09:31 am Title: Chapter Two
I like the dynamic betweeen Harry and Draco. And your imaginatve description of magics is intriguing and entertaining.
[Report This]Date: 06/07/04 - 09:28 am Title: Chapter Three
Interesting. It must be time for everything to come full circle. So what is it for Draco? Potions? I look forward to more of your story.