Reviewer: eleanora Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/01/06 - 01:00 pm Title: Following in his Father's footsteps.

oh, do update soon. I really like the story, and draco's change of heart is beautiful. ron's rejection of harry was a little out of character, though, I mean, ron and 'mione have stuck with harry through so much, why would they turn on him because of the prophet, of all things? it doesn't seem plausible. anyway, on a more positive note, the death eater's birthday celebration was wonderfully horrible. I could wish the girl had lived, but that's obviously not a possibility, so well done. I really like the idea of draco giving his hatred of voldie and dear old dad harry's face at the crucial time, it's a cool idea. i must say, overall, love the story, just... do update soon.

Reviewer: sea_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/08/05 - 02:01 pm Title: Following in his Father's footsteps.

hey this is cool. It's a good story line. But i think in the first chapter, unless harry has a bigger hagover than i ever have, he probably drages his trunk out of the door not his drunk. Oh, this story makes you feel so sorry for draco, i really love him (dont you hate how in the "half-blood price they make him evil, that is just too mean!). also if this set as the 6th book how come Lucis isn't in jail? i no your story, your plot. it's good though. write more of it. have fun moonbathing, i'll have to try it sometime.

Reviewer: noinspiration Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/07/05 - 03:48 am Title: Following in his Father's footsteps.

Ooh! I like! Up-date soon, please!

Reviewer: muddypaws Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/05 - 08:07 am Title: Following in his Father's footsteps.

As was already said, the few typos get in the way a bit, I'm sure you'd have no problems finding someone to proof read them for you...raises hand [hidden agenda = getting to read the new chapters first] Ron seemed a little out of charcter and the cruciatus curse is preformed by say "crucio". That's all for nitpicks from me. Stunning writing, am waiting for the next installments with baited breath.

Reviewer: HLBabi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/05 - 04:05 pm Title: Following in his Father's footsteps.

YAY!! I'm very excited I can't wait for the next chapter! HURRY!! I wanna know what happens.

Reviewer: Teva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/09/04 - 09:01 am Title: Following in his Father's footsteps.

Spelling glitches and missed words get in the way of the plot but so far this story can stand it. I am still hazzy about why Ron is so dowen on Harry, seems a bit out of character, I supose that will be unraveled in time. Do write more, I want to see how far you can take it. Please don't sanctify Draco so quickly, he's a work in progress. Other wise. Great. Write more. wollow some

Reviewer: Nicolette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/04 - 02:19 am Title: Following in his Father's footsteps.

Loved the description of both Harry and Draco... Ron sounds like a complete ass to me!! Lol... For some reason, I found Draco apologising to the girl he raped damn sweet!! Can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope the tension between Harry and Draco will be ELECTRIFYING!! Great storyline, and keep up the splendid work! And yes, I do agree that nature beats technology any old day...

Reviewer: bakachan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/08/04 - 02:51 pm Title: Birthday Blues

Good start.. continue...PLEASE!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Even one person reading this is good enough!!