This one made me shiver in a few ways. Well done, well done!
Very good twist at the end.
Interesting. Severus in a gay bar is usually awful but I like Snape comparing his sneer and smirk to the other man's.
Author's Response: Well, you have to admit, Methos smirks with the best of them
Ooh, I liked the end. I liked your Severus too; so very him. I loved it when he stalked out of the bar and then stalked back in again - perfect :). Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Well... we had to get the name of the bar in somewhere.
WOOOOoooooohhhhhh (shudder) !!! Very sexy, very well-written! I love the idea of Snape having sex with Death - probably the only lover alive (HAH!) who could intimidate him.
Author's Response: Exactly.
oohh - I liked this a lot - it would be really great to see a prequel - the final battle with Adam 'behind the scene' as it were. A really unique one shot....
Author's Response: Where would Adam be? I just saw him as coming into the bar to fuck with Severus.
That was absolutely breathtaking!! Who is adam really? will there be a sequel? please write some more!
Author's Response: Adam comes from the Highlander universe... once upon a time, he was Death.
Now this is my kind of story. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it