I suddenly crave bottled water.
I'm looking forward to the rest of this. At first, I didn't realize it's still a work in progress, but I'm glad I read it anyways.
Wow. It's wonderfully written. Is there going to be a continuation to this? I'd love to read more. ^0^ Anyway, great writing. Really unique writing style. ^^
Excellent. I usually read ss/hg and was at first shocked she didn't leap up to help him, lol. Wonderful beginning. I sure hope you decide to continue this one.
This is a really interesting idea. I liked Remus' not interfering with the twins hexes, but still trying to give Severus Snape something he needed. Keep going on this story line as it really has potential to be a good, no great story.
Very good writing, you MUST add to it, you simply MUST!!! Speaking of non-con, you should write more on that subject in particular. Very good plot bunny you have here.
Add more to it, please! I really enjoyed this fic so I hope you'll continue with your story. Is novel length to much to ask?
Genius! Lovin' how you portay Snape! Please finish!
Wow, that was great. Please write more. 10/10
I like this story so far. I am eagerly awaiting its continuation.
Just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story. The idea of ruining how someone's water tastes is a seemingly small thing, but really horrible (and petty to do). Like that Lupin noticed and took steps to find a solution. I'll watch for the next chapter. :)
There was non-consensual sex in that story? Where?
It was a good plot germ, but the people in the Order were just too mean to Snape. Albus would never have stood for it.
Author's Response: Well, hey, its a WIP so the stuff is still forthwith. And I'll challenge the response that Albus would have never stood for it, he did while Snape was at school and being teased by the Mauraders and this wasn't much different.
That wussy Remus - still doesn't speak up when he sees folks harassing Severus. Well, at least he got Severus some water! Why doesn't Albus tell the Order members (esp Harry and the Weasley twins) to quit heckling Severus? How evil for Albus to sit there while an exhausted Severus still stands!
Author's Response: Well Albus had other stuff on his mind and he probably doesn't see it as anything major