Truly wonderful story. Artfully crafted and slendidly written! *goosebumps* !
good work. nice story.
good work. nice story.
It's not that dark! Draco's uncertainty and neediness was really well written. I loved it, great job.
WAY HOT!! I LOVED IT. IT WAS DARK THEN SWET AND TENDER. YOU'RE ONE HELUVA WRITER.
Author's Response: TALK to me, lover! So glad to hear that you enjoyed it!
Nice use of the invisibility cloak.
this is one of my favourite stories...i really hope you write more....although not many people have read this, it is probably because the summary may have freaked them out, but it is actually beautiful. Truly, and wonderfully beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you SO MUCH!! I appreciate your taking the time to read and review. Yah, I pretty much suck at summaries, because it embarrasses me to pimp my own work. Glad you read it anyway!
Awwwww I thought it would be a dark fic but it's sweet and forgiving
Intense! That was really well written and the relationship between them is intriguing. Great Story!
Different perspective - nicely done.