Wow- great development, really vivid desire. And a hot payoff worth waiting for!
I really enjoyed this fic! It has an actual (good!) content,and I like the way its been written! Stuff like -> "My last girlfriend moved to Holland of all places" (Holland kicks butt by the way! I live there,lol. I can marry whoever I want to,hurrayy!...No seriously,why should that be such a priviledge,if marrying someone out of love is the most natural thing to do? To bad not everybody in this world sees that.)
wonderful. A story with some actual substance. I love it.
Wow, you really got the awkward feeling down that happens with two people are compatibly orientated but don't know whether the other likes them specifically.
Oooh... delicious. I love that they don't just suddenly fall in love and find themselves shagging, the build-up and everything in the first chapter was really good. Not, of course, that I'm complaining about the second. ;) Loved it!
It's good to find some Angelina/Alicia fic. It's not a pairing that you see very often. You did a marvelous job with it.
I second the realism point, Well written to boot!
Sweetly done...with a dash of spice. Nice.
How sexy. And funny, and quite realistic - it has it all.
Ooooo! Loved it! Very hot! Now could you please do me a very grand favor? Please please read mine? I know you probably get asked this alot but please? Thanks. ~Love from Lizzie
Fan-fucking-tastic.
Definitely a winner. Hot!
Whoa, this was hot, sexy and well written! I'm literally fanning myself at this very moment. Loved it!