[Report This]Date: 08/06/05 - 01:27 pm Title: (none)
I would have liked it to be a bit longer, but at least it made me sad. It made me real sad. It covered the emotion of weary, and tired. Unwilling to go on. But having to. Time not waiting up for you ...
[Report This]Date: 14/03/05 - 01:04 am Title: (none)
*wipes away the tears*
Sad, and so touching. So beautiful. You have captured the pain and frailty of the subject you were writing about.
*a lone tear makes it way down her cheek*
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I'm glad that this moved you like this - I had really aimed for the reader to feel the pain and terror. Thank you, once again. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/03/05 - 10:26 pm Title: (none)
Nice. I really enjoyed it. The details were wonderful and this was just a plain ol' good fic.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/05 - 06:38 pm Title: (none)
Haunting. But utterly beautiful. I love your take on feelings from them both, but my only question was...where are the others? Not that it perticularly matters...it just makes me curious. ^__^ Good Work.
Author's Response: Haha, I wondered that myself when I was writing it. I was like, "Shouldn't the other two be here?" I guess I primarily wanted to focus on their relationship, and I guess having the other two there was, for me, going to take away that from that effect. Or maybe they were there - they were just watching. Either way, I wanted it to be just those two and how this pinnacle of time affected them. Thanks for reading! I am glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/05 - 02:43 pm Title: (none)
Oh, this is so sad. I've been reading (and writing) so many bastard!Sirius tales of late, I'd almost forgotten his good side. This is just haunting and lovely. Remus is such a tragic figure, and Sirius's helplessness just beautifully represented. Excellent work, as always!
Author's Response: In my eyes, Sirius is only not a bastard when he is trapped in the thick of a situation like this where he is forced to face his emotions and fears. He is otherwise a very closed off male, due to the pain and suffering of his family. He's a very passionate person when it boils down to someone or something he truly cares about - like Remus, in this instance. Thanks for reading and thank you for yet another wonderful review. :)