[Report This]Date: 07/08/06 - 05:42 pm Title: III: Touch
Very good. You should move it to 'completed' status and you would probably get more readers :D
[Report This]Date: 25/01/06 - 11:26 pm Title: III: Touch
I only came across this fic because of that nifty little "Random Fic" feature, and I'm so glad that it caught my attention. You managed to make this such a sensuous portrait-without them even touching one another until the very end. You really have a descriptive gift--none of your words wasted, not a one of your phrases hackneyed, and you captured the danger and thrill of voyeurism so perfectly. A wonderful little trio--well done.
[Report This]Date: 09/04/05 - 01:24 am Title: III: Touch
It does beg for more, doesn't it? Please continue, this is good. :)
[Report This]Date: 06/04/05 - 05:42 am Title: III: Touch
I hope this is not the end. It's fun to read something that wouldn't normaly be in the books. Especialy if you know how to write the stuff.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/05 - 08:04 pm Title: II: closer
good job so far, please do keep it up ^_^ d
[Report This]Date: 29/03/05 - 04:01 pm Title: II: closer
Well, chapters are a bit small... ;-) Keep writing.