Reviewer: Clakkers Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/07/08 - 04:25 pm Title: Movement

I thought that was brilliant, but I don't think you should make it into a story. Not because it won't be good enough, but because it is so much nicer as a one shot descriptive piece of writing. It'll take away the charm if you run it on in my view.

Reviewer: nysweethrt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/05 - 05:17 pm Title: Movement

i think you should make this into a story

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I do have a sequel that's partially written.