This story is... wow, I have no words. "Chilling" is the best description, probably. Your Snape truly understands the concept of revenge, doesn't he? It's a dish eaten very, very cold. He's rather insane, though very logical and relentless in his madness.
Also, my favorite pairing is Snape/Lupin, and I think this is going to be one of my favorite stories involving those two. Your last sentence, "You're next, my pet", is terrifying - and funny at the same time, which makes it even scarrier.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it; of all my fanfic, this is one of my favourites too. :-)
Oh, wow! Personally, I think Snape is Dumbledore's man, but this is a very good look at the flipside of the debate! I especially like how you match the "offense" to the way they get killed: James impresses girl/can't save her life (or his), Sirius was bored/Sirius was bored or felt useless, Remus wanted love and friendship/he will be denied love and friendship, Peter wanted protection/his protector will kill him! :D It's quite brilliant, really....
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it; I also think Snape is Dumbledore's man, but was a little disturbed by how easy it was to turn him into a black hat... :D
And now a signed review, since you deserve it. o.o Sorry, I only just signed up.
Author's Response: LOL :D
Holy crap. -is intensely jealous- Wow. That was amazing. And, like another reviewer said, a bit scary. And I was just starting to like Snape, too... XD Great job. Absolutely flawless.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What kind review! And don't dislike Snape on my account; he's a lovely man, and I adore him. I just decided to let his evil twin out of the closet (pun intended; I've never done anything slashy before :D ) for this story. Thanks again!
A very good story, especially the perfect fit with canon. It was almost scary to read. I will definitely read more of your stuff when I find it.
Author's Response: Thanks! Most of my stuff is on Occlumency, under the penname "mouse". I'm glad you liked the story. :D
That was fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!