[Report This]Date: 28/07/05 - 12:29 am Title: Interlude
^.^ that was a cute interlude. ^.- it was fun to look into the past. rem's freinds r so supportive. ^.^
[Report This]Date: 28/07/05 - 12:18 am Title: Attraction
aw, rem and sirius were talking to each other about stuff, how cute. ^.^ hm, and they really r smart to have thought about the map and put that much detail into it. ^.- great chap.
[Report This]Date: 28/07/05 - 12:05 am Title: Sparks
tsk tsk, sirius should get used to this new james. ^.^ looks like lily is changing him for the better. *chuckles* padfoot's gonna get jealous.
Author's Response: -cling- I love you for all the reviews ^^; Have some cookies. Thanks so much ;D
[Report This]Date: 27/07/05 - 11:54 pm Title: Restless
^.^ hm, i wonder why remus is having nightmares. ^.- and it was interesting to put peter in hufflepuff, it puts a twist on things. vondaba start, it's cool.
[Report This]Date: 25/07/05 - 06:33 pm Title: Epilogue
*bursts into tears* That was brilliant! You should have far more reviews. I really, really enjoyed this, and although some of your sentences read a bit oddly and there were a few lapses in canon, they totally didn't detract from the story. I loved the interludes, too. Very clever.
I hope you're proud of this story, and I hope you write again soon.
Author's Response: Ha, yes, oddly worded (not too mention overly long) sentences are one of my biggest weaknesses in writing x_x; Eh, and I tried to avoid canon lapses (besides the obvious Pettigrew in Hufflepuff) -- there must be something I missed. Hm...
[Report This]Date: 25/07/05 - 05:18 am Title: Epilogue
Absolutely superb writing! You sound as if you should be writing the books, it's fantastic! And the humor is well recieved throughout to distract from angsty part.
Well done! I enjoyed it greatly!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! ^^ I'm glad the humor worked, since it's never been my best thing.
[Report This]Date: 21/07/05 - 07:48 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow, it should be a crime that such a good story has so few reviews! Your writing is excellent! You captured all the characters, in my opinion, perfectly, and I especially like the way you made Peter a believable friend for the Marauders, despite what his future holds for him (And I agree, he should have been in Hufflepuff). I also enjoy that the POV and time frame of the story is broken up...I'm not quite sure why...it just seems to fit. Anyway, thanks for such a great read!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks ^^; I'm just happy HBP didn't blast my fic into AU. -gaspgasp-
[Report This]Date: 18/07/05 - 12:28 pm Title: Epilogue
You deserve so many more reveiws then you have!!! It made me so sad, the ending dream =(. Your story truly is a work of art and I'm happy you didn't give up on it even though you only had one reveiw =)
Author's Response: Thank you ^^; In truth, I finished it because my friend was reading it for me and rooting me on by picking out quotes she liked. Ha. It was fun to write.
[Report This]Date: 15/07/05 - 05:48 pm Title: Epilogue
Hey :)
I never reviewed a HP fic before but I did love reading this and I wanted to say... brilliant... and written so great too, I loved how you switched between times, and Siri and Remus... I adore reading about the Marauder era, their friendship's so special... one for all and all for one, and the like! :)
I was hoping that the end as we know it wouldn't come :o( The final words had me crying too...
I wish I could write as well... bravo... hope you'll write more, it was wonderful! *applause*
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much ^^; I hope to write more HP fanfics, but the trouble is that ideas are rather scarce... maybe Half-Blood Prince will give me some, but fanfics for that would have to wait a while, anyway, wouldn't they?
[Report This]Date: 14/07/05 - 09:45 pm Title: Epilogue
Amazing story- I loved it! You have totally brought me into the HP fandom, I previously disliked Harry Potter fanfiction but you have changed that. Thankyou for that story, it was beautifully written.
Author's Response: Oh, wow, thanks ^^; That's probably the best compliment I could get.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/05 - 10:02 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow!
Author's Response: Heh, thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/05 - 04:00 pm Title: Restless
Well, you know I love it. I almost wanted to go to Castaway and find my quotes, but then I didn't feel like it. I'm retarded. Love ya. xx
[Report This]Date: 09/07/05 - 05:27 am Title: Sparks
1. Who else do you know goes by that name
2. I liked th e2nd chapter IDK ho wmuch deeper into th estory I will read but as long as I do I will continue to review....nice in my opinion...I am in it for the story since I don't know squat about HP anyway....later Kher ^_^
Author's Response: Lol XD If you can like it without knowing HP, I'm doin' pretty good... I'd advise you to stop at... what was it... chapter 7 (Closer), Mr. Homophobia, or you'll recieve quite a shock halfway through...
[Report This]Date: 07/07/05 - 12:21 pm Title: Restless
Nice way to open a story up very funny I can't waot to see how it develops...keep writing beyond this story cause your good at it ^_^
Author's Response: ...CJ...?
[Report This]Date: 05/07/05 - 07:23 pm Title: Epilogue
Wonderful!!!!!
But so sad...I wanted to cry for Remus. :( You are a fabulous writer, and I hope that you continue posting more work here. -Jackie
P.S. When can I expect my S.P.E.W. badge in the mail? :) J/K.
Author's Response: =D Soon's I come up with another irresistible story idea, I'll post again. o.o Hopefully that'll be sooner rather than later! -rummages around for a S.P.E.W. badge- Here ya go.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/05 - 03:20 am Title: Apart
Eep!!! My name's in the author's notes!!!!!!!!!! Very excited now. :) Loved these two chapters. Can't wait to read the rest!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/07/05 - 03:09 am Title: Interlude
Yay!!! Wahoo!!!
Sorry, had to make a happy noise... :)
Author's Response: XD ^^; Happy noises are good...
[Report This]Date: 04/07/05 - 01:39 pm Title: Restless
Very well written, and a wonderfully believable take on the Moony/Padfoot pairing. Thank you for sharing such lovely work!
Author's Response: Aaww, thank you for reviewing ^^; -feels loved-
[Report This]Date: 04/07/05 - 12:51 am Title: Valentine’s
Still fabulous. I'm loving this! And now I will go to bed, though I would much rather stay sleep deprived if it meant that the rest of the chapters were posted... :) Four chapters practically at once is a rare and wonderful thing, so I won't bug you TOO much. :) Can't wait to read the rest. -Jackie
[Report This]Date: 04/07/05 - 12:27 am Title: Matchmaking
Okay, so I decided I was going to write a review for every chapter I read from now on, because this story is fabulous, and I'm more than a little annoyed that no one else has taken the time to review such a great story. But I'm really bad at writing reviews...so please excuse the dorkiness of my posts. :)
Your fan, Jackie
Author's Response: Aawww, thanks ^^; =P
[Report This]Date: 04/07/05 - 12:14 am Title: Apologetic
Great chapter!!!! Loved it. Next... (Let's see if I can read the rest before I fall asleep at the computer) :)
[Report This]Date: 03/07/05 - 11:54 pm Title: Interlude
Oh my god, there's four new chapters...I think I'm in heaven. K, off to read. :)
Author's Response: XD I feel lurved.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/05 - 01:12 pm Title: Restless
OH my gosh .. I'm not one to leave comments at every chapter, but this chapter just made me giggle all the way through. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot ^^; Hope you like the rest, as well!
[Report This]Date: 01/07/05 - 11:17 pm Title: Angry
Oh dear...update quick!
Author's Response: Oh, yay, a review--I was beginning to wonder if I'd get any ^^; I'll update as quickly as I'm able--the story is complete, but I can only put two chapters in queue at a time. ^^;