Wow, that story is great. It's almost as if you're there while reading it! I've written a story about Hermione and Prof. Vector, too, so of course I was very interested in how you did it. I'm kinda depressed. Now I think even less of my own fic, although my friends told me I was "talented"... *sigh* I've never seen a story with that pairing before, but it fits perfectly. Why elso would Arithmancy be Hermione's favourite subject?? ;-) Greetz Julika
Wow. I don't usually like fics with teachers and students, but I think this was really well written, and, um...pleasant, yes that is the word I will use. Excellent job.
haha i liked the ending. really good.
Nice imagery, but...
"Here I am, three days going out with Seamus Finnegan, and I’m in my bead stroking the little wand to fantasies of Professor Vector."
Bed, dear, bed.
Author's Response: Oops, I missed that! Thanks for pointing it out!
i really liked the ending. good job. the imagery was hot too.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed!
"Merlin, Hermione, I think, you might be top of every class you’re in, but you don’t know a thing about what you want, do you?" Don't we all! I'm not generally one for big age differences in femslash but I like the way this is written. Thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for yur review!